Between Two Lungs - Comments

Awwww
Jordan is a sweetheart :]
So nice.

EEE! It's getting to the end!
This story rings so close to my heart it's crazy

I must say, your writing is quite good. You have a certain grace and class that makes the story and characters realistic. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait until you begin your Sid story!

More soon!

a very emotional chapter.
well done.
:)

hopefully this is a step in the right direction for her and her parents!

Awwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That last chapter made me tear up!!!!!! I love this story so much :) :D:P:):D:P:):D:P

Good on her for talking to Marc and for trying to amend things with her parents!
More soon, please!

I'm glad she talked to Marc and can't wait to see how things go with her parents!

I'm glad she's working on getting better so much and trying to make amends with everybody, but I can imagine that trying to make amends with her parents will be anything but easy.

Lalala
:]
All is almost right.

Jeez, you're an updating FIEND! Like 8395 updates already this week.
I though I would "reward" all your work with a lovely comment. :)
I forget if I have commented on this story before, so if I did, it might sound like something I've already said...
I love this story. It's not overly gushy and lovely dovey which is awesome.You leave me wanting more, but then you UPDATE so often and it's like the heavens are singing. I can't wait to see what happens next. :Þ

Way to show her you care, Marc - nice one!
Atleast now she can be with Jordan properly?
More soon, please!

Immediately after hanging up the phone, Jordan made a beeline for his car. His team captain, Sidney Crosby, called out his name and stopped him in his tracks.

"Staalsy, where are you going? We have practice."

Leave it to Mr. Crosby to say something to him
xDD.
Jaykayy.
I Love me some Sid.

Dear Marc,
You have every right to be mad. But pull your head out of your ass for one minute and go talk to Mae. You will then hear what she has to say and you guys may actually be friends again. If you love her, you will do it.
Love,
Me.

I always enjoy reading these updates. :) I love this so much : ):):):D:D:D:P:P:P

at least Marc knows about them now...
cant wait for more!

So I really want to kidnap jordan if he is really like that!
Then smack marc for not supporting her.
More soon

So I'm liking where this story is going...and I have to say that I'm kinda glad that Marc broke up with her because they just didn't work together well. Jordan is such a sweetheart for sticking with her through all of this. I can't wait to see what's coming up next! Update soon please?

WOW.
if marc really loved Mae, he would have stayed with her and helped her too. just like what Jordan's doing. but this is really good because now, JORDAN, can be with mae!
:D
i feel so happy.
:)

I think it's better that he broke up with her anyway, now she can be with Jordan. But I do think he should have at least let her explain to him what was going on. can't wait for more!