Between Two Lungs - Comments

I'm probably late to this but I only just found this story and finished reading it. I think you did a really good job and I loved the story. It's very different to other Jordan Staal stories but that's what made it so good. Definitely my favourite Jordan story I've ever read.
I loved Jordan's quote too :)

So, I wanted to leave a quick comment before I go back to reading the rest. I like this story. A lot.

I just finished chapter 22 and it just reminded me of this guy friend I have that I like a lot... He has been clean from weed for two months. He was addicted and never thought he'd quit. I used to have my own addiction. Just over seven months clean from it now. It's an amazing feeling. Thinking that Mae is going to be able to quit makes me so happy. It just... I guess in a way I connect and it makes me so happy. It makes me really want to go hug the HELL out of my guy friend. I'm so freaking proud of him... It's unbelievable. You did really good with this so far.

=)

Oh, I'm so late on this! The start of my holiday coincided with the last chapter and I have been dying to read it since I've been away!! That was a swey ending and i loved Jordy's quote! :)

i'll be moving onto your Sid story soon, hopefully!!

Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was such an amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it :) It made me tear up near the end ;) And when she put Jordan's quote on her wall, that was the icing on the cake Hehee :) I thought that was funny b/c I have a story called Icing on the Cake :) I'm so cool :) Anyways, I loved this so much and I'm so sad it's over :) But now you have a Sidney Crosby story I can look forward to :) I'm excited!!! I loved this so much :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D :D:D :P :P:P:P:P

It was fantastic......still think there should be a sequel!!!

Oh my gosh. I loved this story!
Sad to see it end.
Amazing job!

oh my.. i cant believe it's over.
im not taking this out of my subscribe list.
i want to read this over and over and over again.
i loved the ending. very satisfying.
a job well done.
keep up the great work

awee, that was adorable!
I just can't wait for the Sid story now ! :D

aww (: i loved the ending.
can't wait for the sid one!

Aww! The ending was so cute! I loved the story.

i really loved your story. i got excited every time i got an e-mail telling me it was updated! :)

Awe I'm sad to see this story end :(
when you start posting the sid one, would you send me a link? :)

aw great ending :)

I wasn't really sure about the story when I first started reading it, but I loved it :) good job!

loved this whole story! :)
i'm ready to move on to sid..haha

>.<
It's over...

This story was awesome. That was a great ending :]

that. was. fantastic.
omg
I'm so sad it's over though, I always really look forward to your updates. but now I get to look forward to Sidney.
great job, as always!!! :):)

I really loved this story, thank you for posting it!
And I agree with Jordan's quote, it's definitely true. Sometimes you don't even know that there's someone out there, but in the end you will find, someone always is!

Loved it :) Oooh, can't wait for the finale and I'm also stoked about this new Sidney story!

aw great chapter!