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Ok, so I HAVE to correct one mistake! In paragraph #3, I wrote "I love grannies jealousy@ when I ment "I love frankie's jealousy". No, I'm sorry; grannyporn still doesn't turn me on :(

You are amazing! Unbelievably, awesomly, fantastically AMAZING. Once again, I'm speechless, and I can't blame anybody but YOU! Dude, you make me so fucking happy all the time! Franknand Kat are the cutesy couple in the history of Mibba, and I can't believe how perfectly you write your shit. I am never going to stop reading yout stuff, and unwilling be expecting rinsed your name at the top of the bestselling authors list someday! You are amazingly talented, and I really hope you know that!

I have now read through the whole thing twice, and I'm still speechless. This level of writing is beyond ANYTHinG I have EVER read on mibba. And believe me when I say that I'm A mibba slut. Oh my GOD, words can not describe you!

Inlove the cute boyfriend-girlfriend scenes. You really put thoughts and feelin behind them, and that is something we can see through your writing. The sex scenes are great; beyond great. You really know how to write them in a hot way, without overdoing it and make it into wannabe playboy. I love grannies jealousy, but more than that, I LOVE how we slowly get to know him more for every chapter. The thing that started it was when his father was the policeman catching them in the act. I loves his dream or becoming a musician, and how he lives by himself because he was kicked out. I can reAlly see Frank Iero in the story again, in stead of some random 17 year old named frank that is supposed to be the guy in mcr, but the author failing with his personality. Let's just but it this way; you nailed it. Not only once, but for every single chapter, you get better and better!

With all that said, I want to comment your las chapter... You wrote twice that she was "only fourteen", but didn't she turn 15 and all that jazz? Or is it something I'm not getting..? I have an excuse for being stupid in English, cause I'm norwegian, lol.

I really wish some kind of drama will take place in the story soon, though. No relationships go 100% smoothly without some bumps in the road. But then again, you've done great with for example that guy kissing kat and stuff! I'm just waiting for one major cliff that they fall off and have to climb back up.

But you are and always will be my #1 favorite author, wifey! I love you; like I've said 28475646 times already!

Please update soon! I'm counting on you getting me another detention for reading your story in class <3

Ps. Sorry for mistakes; yet again I'm on my iPhone I. The middle of the night!

Love

i actually likee the rewritten one better the last one was rushed and we got none of the snuggling that the couple is famously cute for and poor frank how will he live without the love if his life!!??

I love the story!
One of my favourites on here! :)
xx

yes, yes, YES! You got your groove back sweetie! That chapter hit the nail right on the head. the depth of emotion, the plot itself was just awesome. I really like how you added the talk with her dad in, that part was really needed. Daddy needed to get his word and reasoning in. i didn't think he was a douche before, but for the others it really clears the fog.

Just, urgh, I really can't explain how happy I am right now. i knew you would get your heartbeat to the story back. but, remember get the chapters out at your own pace. Dig through your heart and mind and come up with the best ideas possible and get a chance to write them down. You get your best stuff down when you don't rush, just look at this chap!

Keep it up sweetie, as always, I love it!

That was so much more like them. I like how you put some dialogue from her dad in there, not making it seem like he was being mean and bossy. It was great.. . . . .I wonder if her seduction idea will cheer him up? (Duh!)

HAPPY FUCKING BIRTHDAY YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON.
(I know I'm a day late, but I was at 30 Seconds to Mars yesterday)
I loved this. More than... rayguns.

It took me 2 days to read the entire thing, but it was worth it! I love this story!

Thanks for updatinngggg!! And happy birthday:) mines tomorrow(the 30th) xD were birthday buddyyysss. Haha...just kidding o.o

O.o daddy home is NVR good? are u briliantly insane? lmao
shit u have quizilla? wats ur user name?

If you feel that strongly about it just take it down and try again. It is, after all, your story. I think your readers will understand,(I DO!!! 8) ), I know how you feel. I have a creative writting class and we have deadlines. Ugh, they will be the death of me. Anyway, things will be peachy keen, you know, as long as you keep the other one coming. lol I love that story and I love this one. I have faith it'll work out seeing how much work you've put into it thus far. Just keep it rollin'.