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interesting I like it

I love this but if you hate this then I won't make you update. I can daydream about it. But the real story would be better

I love it!!!Fish-boy is like Fang ;) I am subscribing better keep writing!

It's interesting, you will have to write more.

I like it. I really do. Keep it up. MORE UPDATES I DEMAND!! XD LOL

Just got through with Chapter 3 and it was good. I'll try and read 4 tomorrow.

I honestly don't see why you hate it. It's very good. I really like this story, and on here, you probably won't get many readers or comments, unless it's a slash story. Just the way people are. But I really like how you described the suicide. Waiting For the Time of Day has one that I'm proud of. It was very close to home.
Does this story have some parts that are more real than the rest?

Haha I'm first to comment. It was very good. I subscribe. Or I will when I'm not on my psp. I like the idea, and you write very well. Can't wait to read more.