Young Love Was Such Dumb Love - Comments

John you so stupid!!

Oh my god this is intense, and it seems so real. I love your writing style, it's reaaaaally relateable and the storyline is pretty original! Keep writing? (:

i totally just realized that Max was Moose..i dont know how i missed that
update soon!

AHHH THEY KISSEDLKJLKDFJADF
and John would get drunk.
but omg, they kissed!

Awhhh yay :)

I love this so much oh my god I need more!

:D so cute.

I love this! haha I seriously think its my favorite story I'm reading now.
Update soon

Awweee. Benny and John are so fucking adorable!
I just want them to mack already! Lol.
John with shy self and Bennett being all unsure. Gah!
And them getting ready for prom was so real! Haha.
Seriously, I could picture it right in my head.
Dude, my mom used to make me and my younger brother take
So many fucking pictures on the first day of each school yeah when we
Were younger, so I feel their pain! Lol.
I hope John makes his move soon!
Even though I do love Jared, too! (:

I'm seriously so in love with this, Alaska!
I love all of the little details and conversations you write!
John has a schoolboy crush on Benny, and she's starting to notice the
Hunk he's growing into! WHOOP! WHOOP! Lol.
And awe. I love that Max is being a protective older brother, even though embarrassed her.
I love protective brothers; I don't know why. Lol.
And what the fack?! I didn't think there was any grammar errors in BTW. At least,
Not for someone to report you! FIGHT THE POWAH, 'LASKA! (:

aww, so max is actually the super protective older brother than everyone loves to hate! brothers like that are so annoying, but it's comforting to know someone has your back if a dude ever becomes too much. benny having that figure is going to make this interesting :D

stoked--i really like your writing.

Loved it! :)
I wish guys were looking at me like that lol.
Update soon?

this story is so cute
update soon!

♥

Yeah, hey, ohai.
I really like this story, and I'm hoping for more. I'm pretty sure that this has hit my top ten of 2010 list on Mibba. Even though it only has three chapters, it's really interesting!

Hope to read more ;D

ouch! damn. poor john! why'd benny have to become such a bitch? now i have to hate her.

:) i do really like this--thanks for recommending it.

Aweeee. Poor Johnny boy. He has braces and is a shorty.
Too bad he doesn't realize what a hunk he will grow into. Lol.
I love that all their little sisters are friends with each other. Hahaa.
And Jared's sister is the little slut - such a contrast from him. Lol.
I wonder why Benny was crying.
And I hope that John doesn't make a bitch move and
Bring it up in the morning, or whatever.
I seriously love this Alaska! You be a genius, boo! (:

Subscribe! This is adorable<3

aha i love this.
can;t wait for more!

Ah the awkward stage gotta love it!