I loved how you wrote Natalie drunk. I laughed reading that whole part. You are a very talented writer, keep it up. I look forward to the next update =)
I friggin' love this story ohhh so much! Eddie is by far one of my favourite characters. I'm glad he agreed with me about that whole Michelle thing and wanting to kick her ass. That is why Eddie's my homebody. ;) Ahahah at Brian! He would take her out on a date and get her drunk. I'm kind of worried though about what both Michelle and Matt will say. I love Bri though, so I can't be mad at him. ;) He's too friggin' adorable! :D Her being drunk was by far the best part. I nearly pissed myself laughing when she kept telling Bri that he was cool. Brihen! Bran! xD Update soon! :D <3
i loved this one! for a second there i thought that Brian was trying to make a move on Natalie but then he explained his intentions so its all good lol
Eddie is a fucking trip- Matt's face was probably priceless after catching Eddie do that. But, as for Michelle, bitch needs to go somewhere. I'm really glad that Val was there, and stood up for Natalie(as for the rest of the girls). Matt and Brian to the rescue. :) Knowing that Brian was mad at Michelle for saying that shit and put her in her place put a huge smile on my face. :) Go Brian, go!!! lol More Matt and Natalie love scenes!!! :D
Michelle was out of line calling Natalie like that because of her weight..I'm glad that Matt came to the rescue and made her feel better about herself. You can tell that he really does care about her. Love the update. :D
So yeah. Eddies, "Get it!" dance made me fall out of my chair laughing. When i got back up, I fell back down and broke the chair, because he was trying to play it off acting like there was a fly. xP
I love this story! I have been in that kind of situation once but ive felt that way millions of times.... this is the first story ive read like this i cant wait for the next update :D
Michelle is a MEGA BITCH! i cant believe she had the nerve to say that about Natalie when she knows damn well that she is a beautiful girl. i dont even know why she is so pissed about Matt and Val not being together when Val isnt even pissed! she really needs to get her shit together. i hope she doesnt do anything else stupid ...although im sure she is...
im glad that Leana got on well with Natalie it probably what she needs after losing Jimmy, a new friend =)
Okay, this is the part where I kick the living shit out of Michelle and move in on her man! Take that! lol. I mean, seriously! What kind of bitch is she! That was just low, saying something that she knew would upset Natalie. Urgh, I was just so frustrated with her for that. Nobody deserves that kind of ridicule, 'cause we've all been there. I just need to breathe right now and remind myself that this is just a story. xD but I'm still secretly stealing Brian in my mind. ;) lol.
And I really love how Matt is so sweet to her, as well as the girls and Val. Val is the last person I'd think that would be nice to her, but she's being really sweet. That makes me happy. :) Loved the update! Can't wait for the next one! :D <3