You and your stupid cliff hangers woman! I still love you though You have to update ASAP because my life depends on knowing what's next! life...slowly *cough* slipping *gasp* away
Worst excuse for tripping over someone goes to Zacky! haha....but really hopefully his ego will calm itself cause I can already guess what's going to happen with those two, and it will be exciting. great update!
i like how u've portrayed ur characters so far like brian talking on the phone to zacky and the hand gesture makes him seem very real i think that's why ur such a great writer u make me feel that im there and these people are real,tangible people updat soon plz :]
I'm loving it so far. I like the diner setting and that Brian and Kali are friendly, but only through the diner...perhaps they will run into each other on her weekend off and spend some time together?
Love this so far. I love that for once Brian isn't his usual character in stories and rather wanting to help the girl. I can tell this is going to be amazing, though I am waiting for Zacky to show.....coughs.......can't wait...