Lies and Broken Smiles - Comments

I absolutely love this story for obvious reasons that we've talked about. You're a beautiful and strong person for writing this and letting people into your mind. It gives those who dont fully understand, the perspective of someone with an ED and helps those of us who were never really sure and felt so alone, know that there are others out there dealing with the same thing, battling each and every day, sometimes wanting to get better and sometimes just wanting to give up. You're gonna make it, and I'm always here to support you hun :)

I cried when I read this story, because this is exactly who I am.
I've been anorexic since I was eight, for four years. My ED says, "You are fat and ugly." It screams in my head, "everyone hates you! You aren't good at anything." It is so hard not to listen.
Please know that you are beautiful. Please know that there are so many people that love you.
Please stay strong. I hope you are able to recover.

I love this story :D
And i feel you, it is really hard to recover.

I liked the new chapter, I'd really like to know what happens next.

I love this new chapter. I think it's a turning point for the story and relationships.

its really gud, only started, but subscribed n will read on :)

Uh oh...Kaiden's bringing in trouble. Good chapter!

Awww. Their date was cute, even if there was no kiss. There shall be eventually!

And take all the time you need. I hope you find peace of mind. :D

:( I feel so badly for the way Cali's thinking. And I know that Jess is trying to help, but she's not really. She's just making Cali feel worse. But I understand where she's coming from, wanting to make her sister better and everything. Good update! Sad, but good.

this is an amazing story! update please?
and i never really thought about how much anorexia really does affect people.
i hope you get better<3

Aww! Yay for Cali and Dante! :D Good update.

Your story is amazing!! I love it! :D

Awww. That's so sad. I feel badly for Cali. :( And I hope that your mood gets better! You shouldn't beat yourself up. You're really pretty. :)

You know I LOVE this story! Just the way it is! :) Don't change a thing about it. :)

I really like this story. It's nice to know what others are going through, and I'm not the only one. And this story is written well, and I can't wait for more!

I still like it. I would say re-write it only if you want to. I don't see anything wrong but at the end it's up to you.

I don't think you need to rewrite it. I think that this story is really good at grasping how hard it is for a girl to go through an eating disorder. It conveys a lot of emotion. Keep it up. :)

Don't rewrite it! It's good! Keep updating! :D

My voyage is a long one.
Your mind fascinates me.

I hope those actions aren't something you went through, or are going through.
People who care are rare. but when you find one, they won't give up.

The new chapter was pretty damn awesome! :D