Lies and Broken Smiles - Comments

I like it. Keep on writing. :)

These are amazing:)
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This is amazing.
I've cried.
Keep going, please.

I love it =). It's very realistic. I was thinking though (obviously this isnt a necessity and has nothing to do with grammar or anything), you could put like how much she weighs before each chapter to show how fast she's losing weight...its just a thought =)

I think its awesome :)

this is good so far :) keep it comming xx

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this is great. can't wait for more