Lies and Broken Smiles - Comments

  • Frozen December Moon

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    Nice update.
    December 14th, 2010 at 02:43am
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    Wow, this is amazing..but really sad. I've been through this sort of stuff before so I know what it's like, and this story describes it perfectly. I love it. :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • XxBaiser_DeLa_MorixX

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    i loved it
    cant wait for the chapter :]
    December 13th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • HelpI'mAlive

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    I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really like this!!! I cannot wait for updates! Each chapter gets better and better!!! :D Update as soon as you can! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!! (:
    December 13th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • XxBaiser_DeLa_MorixX

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    i really really liked it
    December 12th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • HelpI'mAlive

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    I can't wait for more!
    November 18th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • ThousandFallenTears

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    I loved your authors note at the end of 14. I've come close to doing that many times haha. But I just thought i'd mention I absolutely love the name Kai! Like it's on my list of names for when I decide to have kids haha. And I am kinda really extremely stoked to see what role he will play and I'm kinda missinf Dante :( Can't wait to read more :)
    November 16th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • HelpI'mAlive

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    This is really awesommmmeee (:
    *subscribes*
    November 16th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • ArTfReAk101

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    wow this is really really great! :)
    November 13th, 2010 at 10:55pm
  • in love we raise.

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    More. Please?
    November 11th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • Frozen December Moon

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    I agree with ThousandFallenTears. I hope you get better. I love this story and I think you should look for a book that's coming out by Portia Derossi, not sure of the title, but it might help because she was in the same situation.
    November 8th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • gods2weety

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    I love it, but it's kinda sad. I never really knew what it was like for people with an eating disorder, till now. I hate people who make fun of it too. It's horrible. But the story is great. Can't wait to read more. =]
    November 8th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • in love we raise.

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    This makes me cry.
    Update.
    November 6th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • ThousandFallenTears

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    This was great and all but the more i read the author comments the more i want to find you and hug you! You are going through so much and i pray that the good side of you wins and it wins fast! I want you to be healthy girl! You are so talented and I have no doubt in my mind you are beautiful. The good side will win for sure! Keep pushin against that bad side and if you ever need to talk i'm here. It's weird I don't even know you but I desperately want you to get better and live the life you've always wanted.
    November 3rd, 2010 at 11:32pm
  • Frozen December Moon

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    Great chapter.
    November 2nd, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • Vegas!

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    AMAZING CHAPTER!!! :D
    November 2nd, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • Frozen December Moon

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    I just starting reading this story and I really like it.
    November 1st, 2010 at 08:38pm
  • sozwoz

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    Im a slow reader at times, so i read the first one kinda depressing but good, will read on. Check out My Life Has To End.
    September 8th, 2010 at 11:32pm
  • ThousandFallenTears

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    i love this story! it's very realistic and keeps me inside of the story. i really like xspiritravenx's idea.can't wait to read the next chapter :)
    September 4th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • MsJayJay

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    Really well written. kinda sad.
    Keep it up.
    August 19th, 2010 at 09:51pm