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  • unlost1996

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    Aw I'm glad you updated this! I like that it's nick's point of view. :)
    September 4th, 2011 at 10:35pm
  • livingproof.

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    aww poor John's jealous. (:
    July 21st, 2011 at 04:23am
  • chic734

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    I think it's working. And even though it was kinda short it was still really cute.
    July 21st, 2011 at 03:37am
  • raja sahara

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    I hope that Halvo won't get hurt by the end of this.
    I liked this chapter a lot. UPDATE! :)
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:50am
  • lovelyhope

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    Wow, Nat and John are such great conversationalists lol. I'm worried that Halvo will get his feelings hurt because he'll hope that Nat will end up falling for him. That's my prediction. Maybe this plan will work out though....but probably not lol.
    July 20th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • better days

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    Please update!! I just started reading this the other day, and I've been reading it ever since; please please please update c:
    July 13th, 2011 at 12:32pm
  • hca_25

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    The story Is so good I was not expecting nat to fake date halvo, yu have to update I know yur gonna make this turn out awesome, I'm gonna be sooooo sad when this story ends bc it's just so darn good!!! <3(:
    July 11th, 2011 at 12:09pm
  • MYP

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    Ack, the plan is working!!! Hahaha. I freaking love it, can't wait for more! It's so good!
    Update again soon please!!!
    July 11th, 2011 at 04:49am
  • lovelyhope

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    I really wish Jayce would just break up with John already. Hopefully Nick and Nat's plan will work though.
    July 9th, 2011 at 07:08am
  • livingproof.

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    “Creepy, big-eyed, mouth breather has a girlfriend?” Adam questioned with his eyebrows raised again. I slightly glared at him and punched his shoulder.
    ^.^ That made my night lol. <3
    I loved this chapter. (:
    July 9th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • An Olympian Hero

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    aha, that was an alright update, Ember!
    but i need more action.
    update soon, yeah?
    <3
    July 8th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • livingproof.

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    Oh shit Nick. ahaha that rhymed.
    Natalie and Halvo would be adorable. <3
    June 21st, 2011 at 01:01am
  • chic734

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    OMG I love Halvo. I wonder if their plan will work. For some reason I have my doubts. haha
    June 14th, 2011 at 07:18pm
  • MYP

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    Loved the update!! And I definitely cannot wait to see the reactions to this plan and how it works out!! Also, love Halvo! He's too cute.
    Update again soon please!!
    June 14th, 2011 at 11:05am
  • lovelyhope

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    I love Halvo, he's so funny lol. I feel like their plan will somehow backfire though.
    June 14th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • raja sahara

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    i am now, officially, even more in love with this than I used to be :)
    June 14th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • livingproof.

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    Love this. <3 (:
    June 7th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • lovelyhope

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    I think her mom might be bi-polar...just sayin'. lol
    June 7th, 2011 at 03:27am
  • L0V3E

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    Lovely story I must say...still love Halvo and Nat. ;)
    May 13th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • BriNANA

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    gahhh why does everyone lie so much?!?
    May 10th, 2011 at 08:11am
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