Wow, this was really beautiful. I've said this before but you really do have such an amazing way of writing genuine romance without making it cheesy or unrealistic. There are only a handful of writers (including the writer up there^ :) ) on here that can do that. I really loved this and Alyssa is a lucky woman. Ben is everything a man should be haha
Can I just say that I think this is quite possibly the most beautiful thing you've ever written. Everything about this - especially the theme of time - really struck a cord in me. You know I love how you have a way with words, but this, goddamn, I felt like I was living it. The words you used flowed so perfectly, and the way you described how nothing else mattered except the now three people in that room was sheer perfection. I love this because it's so utterly realistic but at the same time it's this perfect fantasy life that I want to live out. I love and adore you so much it's ridiculous. This is by far my favorite piece of work of yours so far (though Baby Blue isn't over yet or even anywhere started, so we'll see). And in my mind, I like to think this was the continuation of Her Fearful Symmetry, 'cause honestly it could be!
Thank you so much, boo!! This sure does put the pressure on me to make sure your Adam one-shot/mini series is absolutely perfect, doesn't it? <3
I just re-read. Haha.