Awwwwhhhhhhhhh!!!! I love how protective zach is over kortney! It's adorable. But when else has she been hit hard? And why? You have my interest peeked.
lol i love it there is nothing wrong with it u should not change anything ok if u do i will personlly kill u because it is absolutlly perfect!!!! update soon!!!
He HATES icecream?!!!!! How on earth does someone hate icecream? There are too many types to hate! Oh god, imagine the revenge he takes O.O Very nice, not too cheesy at all, actually entertaining :D
Excellent, i loved this chapter best~ despite those....*deep Breaths* Grandparents