Favorite part this is so funny!!!! ''Seriously. But you don't have to ( Although it always helps me post.) Kortney and Zach appreciate the comments as well. They like being popular(even though Zach does his best to hide it) LOL.'' LOL you gave me a good laugh. Ok that was a semi sad chapter, but I still loved it, so UPDATE!!!! Please and thank you! :-D Update update update!!!
It's a really good story. It's a used plot but you make it unique. The whole rich thing really works too. There are a few spelling mistakes and the bits when you tried to do italic, just remember to proof read and your stories should be fine.
And don't worry about updating i suck at that too. And most authors take forever to publish the next book so it really doesn't matter about the late chapters. People are just demanding.
Okay so as usual it's awesome! Kort seems to get mad at everything and Zach's personality changed quickly. In a couple of chapters your words are missing a letter, but that's normal everyone makes mistakes.
Anyway that's my unprofessional opinion, Seeya round!
hey kourtney has attitude like a sista so the scene was cool. like the fact that the guy stuck up for her. his character is confusing so can u clear it up a little bit. make him tell her the "complicated stuff" but thats all. thanks for the update and sorry for being a bad supporter! and rest well so you can update tommarrow lol