Tie It With a Ribbon - Comments

....... you are just mean.

ALL of that chapter I thought I was pulling my hair out because he died and then he came back.

... I can't help but grin like an idiot though. HE'S ALIVE!!! *dances*
I am now terrified for you to update, but I want more!

HOLY SHOES! D:

Yep, here's your major plot twists that you're very famous for. I really really want to scream out in anger but I'm just going to go read the next chapter..

Wow, that does really make you think about what Alex said O.O
I'm anxious for the next chapter! Even though you're running out of pre-typed D:
More? :D

Chapter 21- I hate Alexandros. Stupid igmo-ramus -.- Will you kill him later? :D

Chapter 22- Awww, I lurvs Zanibar. I think more than Dray. *scratches chin* Maybe, maybe (:

Chapter 23- My favourite chapter so far! You first have the suspenceful scene and then the one with Alex, and then the comic relief with Camille. This cracked me up so much xD I loves it! (:

Chapter 24- Gasp! Wow, the sexual predator thing shook things up D: and... WHO IS MONICA!?!?!

Chaptrer 25- “I—He just said it… I didn’t really have time to react, because my mother walked in, and I had to stuff him in the closet. So now…it’s kind of awkward,” I admitted regrettably, sighing
^^^ I love that xD ^^^ *dances happily* please hurry up and update, pretty, pretty please! I'm absolutely lovin this story!

Chapter 20!
Sorry I haven't commented... again D: I've been running after three rug-rats from the ages 2-7 xD haha.
So is your foot okay!?!
Awww *coes lil Gideon!* Is he getting any bigger? How long have you had him now?

I want to scream in joy and scream in agony. NOOOOO Alex :( I thought you were cool but you're just a jerk!
I <3 Zanibar! ^.^

You just have to write more!!! ((even though I've been awful and haven't read up until today)) You have me hooked more than you did with Trembling With the Strings!!! I'm anxioius and giddy for the next chapter! (:

Thank you for the explanations! ^.^
*giggles because she knows what you're talking about* Yes, you are very notorious for the evil twists and turns xD! It sounds very fair to me! (:

Hey! *recognizes chapter* That was the sneek peek! :D
I think I'm more one the Leonians side than the Aquilians... but that may change. You've got the power to make my sides flip flop until I'm so into it that I'm on both sides xD

Haha ^.^ I like your new homepage, but anywhoo... Alex is very sweet, caring, and protective ((which I suppose is a guard's job...)). If this wasn't going to be a different couple's romance, I would very much like Alex and Lena to be together. I think I see where you're going though. ((maybe)) A love triangle? Possibly. xD
It's good to see that both sides have the same intentions and feelings towards the war. They want to end it... but maybe trying to do that will prove more difficult than it seems? Hmmm.... ((just ignore me, I'm thinking aloud)). ^.^
Well... update please!

I'm a little daft, so I'll see if I have this straight:

Leonians are the lions, and Aquilans are the eagles? Are Leonians humanoid with lionlike features? Or are they lions? Same with the Aquilans. Are they birdlike people? I get confuzzled pretty easily. XD

It's sort of depressing that no one else has commented on this. *glum* Some people just don't know a good sci-fi when they see it. *shakes head sadly*

Anyway, you've come up with quite a deep and vivid world to place your story in. If only mine could be that deep. XD I'm awaiting the next chapter. *hint hint* XD

*squeals in delight because she is the first commentor*
Oh my goodness! These three chapters are amazing so far. It seems that with every story that you finish, you are getting better and better. The first chapter ((summary)) was astounding. Did you make the history up yourself!?! If so, that's just... wow.
The second chapter started to get us into the mood of the kingoms, and the visual of the boundaries and how the Nest and Den are set. You also see the awful affects that the war is causing on both sides.
The third chapter was just chilling. The nightmares were vivid to me as the reader.
And just, overall, it was just... amazing! The description is wonderful vocabulary is awesome. I can't think of adjectives good enough to describe what you have posted so far! Please update soon! (: