Stars Fade Blue - Comments

THIS IS PERFECT.
I think I'm in love with Emmerich.
Please update soon!

This story is amazing. there are no words, just woooww
Please update soon I'm dying to see what happens next! I love the historical element of it and the characters, you have a good writing style
It's just the Shiz really

i didnt see any problems, just please update soon. :)

Oh, sorry, I just now actually chapter 17. I didn't notice any real plot problems and I quite like the bones of the story. I will say that though I do like how your writing style isn't too flowery in terms of things such as literary devices and such, I do think it could go with a bit more depth in terms of the chain of events and even just small events in the story. Sometimes it can be just a little too bare(hopefully you aren't offended). If you were to approach a rewrite I think you should definitely keep in mind character and character relationship development. Regardless if you are rewriting the story or continuing with it or not, I just enjoy your writing style and wanted to give you some honest feedback.

This is very well written. It seems as if you really think about the words you use and the details. I rather enjoyed reading what you have so far.

Pleasepleaseplease update. Im dying to know whats going to happen with this story! It's so good and it's the only one that's set in this time period that I actually like.

I loooovee this story!! Please don't take too long to update again!

this update made my day!!!!!

OH YAY! I squealed when I saw you had updated! It was a lovely chapter, as always. :)

I love this story! I've been looking for a nice romantic story with a historical touch and your story did just the trick. I can't wait for more :) Please update soon -swoon-

EEEP. I'M SO EXCITED THAT YOU'RE BACK TO WRITING THIS AGAIN. It wasn't awful, swear. I can't wait for the next update!

i actuaslly loved this chapter. The format was hard to read but the writing was good and I liked that we gpt back inside Emerie's head. I'm excited to see cossette and farrah again :).

I absolutely adore this story! Honestly, it's beautifully written and I'm loving the turn it's taking.

Anxiously awaiting an update. :]

love love love!!

I do not have an obsession problem. /shifty Not at all. I'm just...up late. -cough- ANYWHO.

YES. I DID THINK IT WAS FARRAH. But this is quite the change. Now I don't know what to think. xD Where the hell is she?! /flail

is it just me, or does it seem like jackATTACK! has a bit of an obsession problem? her second to last comment was at 4:40 am. :) lolz. im exactly the same way tho so me saying that is really hipocrytical (sp?) wat ev. i havnt actualy read the story yet cuz i always look at the comments first so.. ya. ill comment if i like. it might even be at 3 in the morning. XD

Cliff hangers are ebiiiiiiiil. It was really interesting to read some of the history of the war, and of the invading people. I loved it, like I always do. <3

I bet she's there in the camp. As one of the new soldiers! /flail omg, that's epic. I'm digging the speech. It was extremely heartfelt, and well written, and reminded me of some of the speeches I've heard from high-ranking officers. :D

One, I'm really liking the new layout. It's gorgeous. And two, this last chapter. It was beautiful. And sad. And the letter to her was heart-wrenching. It really hit home for me, in a sense. Though it's a different time period and all, writing letters home from war is like. It's all we have. xD I look forward to your next update, as always.

I have to say, this story is awesome. There are a few really good historical stories on Mibba, and I think yours is one of them. :) Also, the last paragraph in chapter eleven, or technically chapter ten — that has to be my favourite part of this entire story so far. It's... the words flow together incredibly well. And now I get a feeling something like growing anticipation. Awesome story.