Thanks to Vodka - Comments

This was absolutely amazing.
I really wish their was more because I would love to continue reading it.
Not just for the contest seeing as how it has ended, but I think there is a lot you can do to this.

Good Job.

I'll have the results out by the end of then night.

That insertion of your username was great. :)
lmfao You're awesome.
The title totally reminds me of a Benjamin Franklin quote.
Something about God making wine and because of that it proves he loves us. lol.

Very nice job, as always I hump you adn your skilzz.

It's all this editing and 1 AM writing, I've got comma on the brain XD

Gracias.

Kandi, not "diabetic comma", "diabetic coma"! I thought you were going to be a doctor!

Anyway, it was a little sad, a little shocking. I liked it :)

It all started on a Friday night in the middle of May. I'm not sure why, but I always like it when stories start like that. It just sounds... cool, ya know? :D

That night, Autum, Logan, and I sat out on the pier, passing a bottle of watermelon Smirnoff back and forth and telling stories about why our lives sucked. I love the imagery in this. Just picturing it in my mind made me laugh.

AND A SURPRISE ENDING? WHAT?

Basically, I really liked this. It was easy to enjoy, and like ballet shoes said, everyone has their own ending to this!

Great job, man. :)

"I was overwhelmed by sensory overload; being with Logan was completely different than being with Kendall. While Kendall was more solid and stable, Logan moved like water. Electricity radiated from every pore on his body, and every time we touched I saw sparks."
I loved that.

Good job. I thought it was really nice, and I enjoyed the piece. :)

Really nice job :)

I love how you place yourself in your story situations, it's something I've never done, but I like how you do that :)

Also, I loved this little bit Electricity radiated from every pore on his body, and every time we touched I saw sparks. Very nice insertion of the username lol.

I think you did amazing with this piece. I enjoyed how you didn't leave us with a set ending. I mean, you hinted around that things would never be the same with the three of them, but we didn't get to read through the actions that took place afterwards and I love seeing that in stories. It allows the reader to interpret things in their own way and use their imaginations to come up with some sort of ending.

Really great job :)

where all the girls were tired of dating the same boys they’d grown up with I can totally relate to this, that line is the story of my towns life haha.

What the fuck does that even mean? He probably thought I wanted to bang him or something. This part made me laugh, haha.

“I think we should take a break.” I hate when guys say that, it actually means "I wanna see other people, but keep you close just in case things don't go as planned."

"Alcohol, some of the greatest times you'll never remember." Brad Paisley's words not mine, this part of your story reminds me of that song, lol.

and every time we touched I saw sparks. haha, I like how your username is added into the story.

Nice read.
=) Good work with it.