That was just adorable....plain and simple. Haha. That song fit them perfectly. And I love how you slyly fit the "or her and Jack? ;)" comment in there....haha!
I dunno what team i'm on anymore. I can't decide. I wanna be on Team Zack and I am for the most part. it's just that Alex is proving himself more and more as the story progresses!
I am freaken in love with this story, no lie. Congrats on over 100 comments by now. you deserve every one. Confusion and headaches? i'm excited to read about this. =D This chapter was cute. Alex is jealous, Zack has the girl. it's usually the other way around haha. I'm glad Zack still has her though. Still team Zack suprisingly haha.
Haha that was funny, love it! That sounded like a brilliant party plan, I've never heard of the restaurant they went to though.. Hmm.. Sounds Disney like. Matt would be very happy And I think that was my favorite part haha. Wheres my beer? xD Okay so update soon<3
i really liked how sky is starting to care about alex :) i absolutley love zack and skylar as a couple even though i love alex as well lol this is a very interesting love triangle :)
i really liek ur story! team alex!! < 3 (h and i actually do read the story of the day link thing! i wish more authors did that cuz those r some good stories!
I'm in love with this story! I love the whole 'two guys fighting over a girl' plot, so please update soon! I'd love to read on what's going to happen next!!!! XD
Sorry I didn't comment on the chapter before last; I just now caught up with updates :[ Alex is in deep crap now. And I have a feeling he's not gonna give up until she's in the palm of his hand, as well.
Awww I actually feel bad for Alex :( I think it could be possible for him to change if he was dating Skylar. But then what about poor Zacky? He's such a gentleman and he's so sweet. I can't choose a team D: Anyways, I love this story so much. You're an excellent writer and this story has tons of potential. It could go one way or another :D I can't wait to see where you'll be taking this.
'He wanted, and had fallen deeply in love with Skylar DeMoir.
And there wasn’t a thing he or anyone else could do about it.'
That most definitely made me 'aww' and whether or not it was a short chapter, I think that that was the perfect way to end it :) The whole thing was perfect, just enough of an insight of what was going through his mind. But he has to wake up to himself if that is really what's going through his head, if he is seriously that jealous and in love with her, he has to realise that he's going to have to put in a lot of effort to prove that to her. Yeah, fair enough he could have any girl he wanted, but he has to think whether they're all worth giving her up. He has to fight for her :) But still, somebody is going to get hurt, but if he truly thinks that she's the one then he'll have to risk it.
Can't wait for the birthday update and thanks for the mention once again, it's really no big deal :)