Not So Jasey Rae. - Comments

  • AllTimePensFan

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    Just found this story of yours and I'm loving it! really jealous of Skylar though. lol. Can't wait to see what's going to happen between everybody ;)
    August 9th, 2010 at 10:16am
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    woah loved that it was deep, and an insight into what he was thinking :D
    loved the update :D
    August 9th, 2010 at 10:03am
  • ShutUpChristine

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    Ahh I love it Ash!!
    Nice chapter, but Alex is seriously acting like a man whore right now.
    He just wants to steal Skylar from poor ol' Zack! Man, why can't Zack get any girls? Haha
    I say that Zack and Skylar should stay together, and she shouldn't get with Alex. His fault for breaking up with his girlfriend, haha.
    ALEX NEEDS TO KEEP IT IN HIS PANTS!
    Gah, update soon<3
    August 9th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • Akayytoremember

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    aww poor Alex. :/
    Can't wait to see what's to come.
    Sorry I havent been commenting.
    I've been really busy and just reading updates from my blackberry when I get an email saying there's a new chapter and I can't comment from my phone :/
    August 9th, 2010 at 08:00am
  • JaseyRaex3

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    I am really loving where this is going. You're doing a great job, I can't wait for the next chapter! <3
    August 9th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • Miss Jordii.

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    I feel bad for Zack, Skylar is teasing him in the bed haha.
    Still, Team Zack but Alex is making his way into my heart and trying to replace Zack.
    I believe Alex, Amelia just annoys me! haha. =D
    August 9th, 2010 at 02:43am
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    Ah!
    I feel bad for not commenting on the past chapters. D:
    I guess I'm too lazy to click the "comment" button but you know how I am!
    Also! If I had to choose who Sky should be with, it should be with Zack just because, he's sweet and laid back and also sounds like he cares about Sky a lot. Alex, on the other hand, gets on my nerves sometimes but I can also tell he loves Sky.
    But TEAM ZACHARY STEVEN MERRICK! <3

    Anywhoodles!
    Great updates!
    I love this story uber much but I still feel bad for not commenting a whole bunch!
    August 9th, 2010 at 02:24am
  • SHG Vegas

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    I love this story. It's hard to find good ones anymore, especially fanfics, but you do an amazing job. I like Zack alot--he's pretty easy on the eyes--but Alex has something, too. I can't wait to see where it goes from here!
    :D ♥
    August 9th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • psuche

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    Haha poor zack just got turned on for nothing! :]
    August 7th, 2010 at 02:57pm
  • ShutUpChristine

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    Ahahaha! The last part was funny, I thought they were really gonna do it(;
    And I was like "Uh oh, oh c'mon! I'm eating right now!"
    xDDD
    But after that, I'm assuming Skylar just wanted to tease Zac ;D
    I think that was my favorite part! Lmao, I dunno why.
    and Amelia is being a real bitch right now? Yes? I think so.
    And I really wanna know what's going on in Alex's big of a head!
    Gah, update soon<3
    August 7th, 2010 at 08:29am
  • jade_

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    awwwww, Zack's sweet... but Alex... haha
    I can't wait for the next chapter, you make it sound like it's mega opinion changing :)
    I think I have just decided that I want neither of them to be with Sky, because in the end one of them is going to get hurt and that would suck...... but Alex is alright, you know...? ;) hahah hint hint :)

    I think my favourite part was the whole
    "I changed."
    "Maybe he has too."
    bit as well :) I was like... 'shut down.' haha
    I kind of expected Amelia to full blow up about it after the whole "I'm not sure I can trust you about this." thing. But she took it quietly, which was surprising.
    And Amelia admitting that she knows Alex wants Sky just put the icing on my cake I reckon :)

    Can't wait for the next update :):)
    August 7th, 2010 at 07:51am
  • Classy Not Classic

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    Love<3 Subscribing now!

    I think Skylar should pick Alex, because Zack already mine ;)

    Nahh, She should pick Zack. They're so cute together!
    August 7th, 2010 at 04:29am
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    love the update :D
    ahhh she is a tease
    August 6th, 2010 at 08:42pm
  • psuche

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    I think I believe Amelia instead of alex i don't really know they both tend to lie a lot. Any who great update! :]
    August 4th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • Got Dynamite

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    I believe Alex. Amelia, just, I don't know.
    I'm waiting for Zack to get pulled into the drama somehow.
    August 4th, 2010 at 05:12pm
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    love the update :D
    August 4th, 2010 at 10:19am
  • brianna7x

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    Ahh, I liked the Alex/Zack balance as well
    ;]

    I may be biased on this but I have to say that I believe Alex on this one. Not that I don't understand where Amelia is coming from, but still! I don't know
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    August 4th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • ShutUpChristine

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    AHHH! Loved it as usual! Nice job on this one :D
    And that key to the hotel thing was my favorite part too XD
    I loved it, and I think both Alex and Amelia are full of shit, lmao. Amelia for being all clingy and crap, and Alex for using her. So I think it's a pretty equal balance of the both(:
    Still glad that Zack/Skylar are together! Cutest couple in the story besides Rian/Kara!
    I looovee Kara, she's so pretty and gorgeous and I can't believe her and Rian broke up! They were PERFECT for each other! Geebus..
    Anyways, update soon! I love it, keep up the good work, Ashley(:
    ;3 <3
    August 4th, 2010 at 07:32am
  • roshambo

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    I love this story!!! Your writing style is awesome. I'm definitely Team Zack. And I do agree, his nose ring is dead sexy hahahaha
    When I first started listening to ATL I didn't know who played what, and I thought Zack was Rian and Rian was Zack hahaha then I finally saw them live after about six months of listening to them.
    My favorite part of the entire story is when they all go out partying and then wake up in the same bed. I feel like that's happened to me before :p
    My favorite part of the last update was when Sky asks Rian "Is that her?" and Rian says "Yeah, that's her." I just that was just so dead cute :)

    Dondè está Matteo Flyzik???
    August 4th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • jade_

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    Alright, wow. I totally did not expect Rian to be that easy going about the whole kiss thing, for a minute I thought he was going to try and encourage her to tell Zack about it, instead he kind of warned Sky about Alex... and cute Zack's back, I can smell the sweet essence of drama already haha.
    If Alex accidentally let information about the kiss slip to Rian, who's to say he won't do the same around Zack... therefore I think that Sky should tell Zack before he hears it from someone else.

    On the whole Alex topic, I kind of believe him because I've never really liked Amelia, as I'm sure you probably could have told due to previous comments haha.
    I think she's just making all of this shit up because it's clear she's insecure about Sky and Alex and has been all along.
    I'm sure she's been jealous since day one seeing as Amelia was the one who was pretty much in love with Alex and the guys and Sky barely knew who they were, yet Alex gave Sky his number... that would suck for Amy.
    So in my mind, I guess I understand why she would be making up a lie about the real reason why Alex and herself broke up. She's probably out to make him look like the bad one because she knew their relationship isn't going anywhere. She's obviously upset because shit wasn't working out between her and Alex and that was like her dream and she know that if they broke up he would just go after Sky and it's kind of obvious Sky does have feelings for Alex as well, so now she tried to make Sky think Alex is a huge prick so neither herself or Sky end up happy.
    ^that probably only makes sense in my head, but whatever :)

    I loved the update, keep it coming :)
    August 4th, 2010 at 06:32am