Don't Want to Die Alone Without You Here - Comments

Oh god, the emotion in this is incredible! I'm close to bawling like a little baby haha.

The first flashback, where they were six years old, was adorable! Jimmy building a castle and making Lyla his princess, so sweet!

And the roses, corny maybe, but still really cute!

As I was reading, I knew it was coming, I knew the moment would be coming up, but I wasn't prepared for it at all!

“Lyla, will you hold my hand?” That line did it for me! Floods of tears! Haha.

Awesome story, loved it! :D

This was such a touching one-shot :')
It made me cry more than once!
You did a fantastic job and I really enjoyed it!!!

First off, it was very well written, and it had a nice plot. :D
Though, I had a hard time finishing it, I loved it.

That was amazing. It made me cry. I can definately see why you won the contest. Well Done.

Awe. That's so sad ): I loved it dear. It was grand.

Holy crap... I was almost at the brink of tears..
This was a great one shot.

Aww...this was soo cute, nice job <3

D: so close to tears....great one shot, sad but great...