Gosh, I love your writing style for this story, it's so unique and different --- A good different of course. I've never met a person who writes as well as you do, and coming from me, this is a huge complement. Those who know me know that I read like a billion books in a week. And that billion doesn't include the stories on Mibba that I've read. You write Gabrielle's story in everybody else's point of view aside from Gabrielle herself but yet you give enough information about her that it keeps the readers greedy for more updates but yet in a professional and sophisticated way. With Jesse there, you do that extremely well. Hell, even without him there, you could pull it off. In conclusion, I rate you an infinity amount of stars out of one. :D~
You have an amazing story here. I can't wait until you update further, the character changes are so interesting to read. You're fantastic at switching points-of-view and personalities!
Okay, I finished. I agree with you, Quinn is fucking awesome. I'm secretly Quinn and I'm having Puck's baby. Did you know that? It's true. I really do like this story, I'm interested in what's going to happen between Rachel/Gabi/Jesse. WAH.
You're one of the better Glee writers on this site. There's a total of three that I stalk on this site.
I've read the first chapter. and all I can say is I"m going to hump you. I love Puck. :) He's my favorite. Also, you have Kurt down pat. As well as Rachel's ignorance. Brava.