L'amour - Comments

*sharp intake of breath* Oh my. Jake Gyllenhaal and Paris, France, mixed with the most stunning descriptions I have ever read (surpassing most books, in fact), and excellent grammar, creative plot lines, and a cute layout? This is so amazing. Now, I have to check out everything else of yours. I would give you about a 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 out of 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000.

Yessss, I know I commented on this before, but my comment sucked. Horribly. And I still loved silkie's fangirling up there, haha! Anyways, like I said in my last comment, of course Paris - aw, c'mon, Jake + Paris = hyper amazingness - and of course Jake. He's so perfect and this was so gorgeous. I love how the details slowly pull you in and the ending just goes WHAM!
I love this so much, you have no idea :D Lovely job! <3

Agreeing so much with Ava Marie.
Really. It's amazing and you described everything so wonderfully, it made me want to cry. xD
Great work!

Sham-flicking-wow. (:

This just made me want to squeal. You're amazing with details and ideas. Pretty much the whole time I was reading I was like, "Crackers! She made a suitcase seem as awesome as a foriegn car. (: This whole thing just flowed and then the ending--gah, I'm speechless. The only word that comes to mind is: loved eeet. <3 :D

Stunning Job. C:

You are so incredibly talented.

Everything was beautifully detailed, poetic, it flowed... I'm at a loss for words.

Truly enjoyable. :)

LOVE IT!!

Seriously. Your descriptions are wonderful.

Great job! :)

Aha, there's a Jake rage going around. Not saying it's a bad thing, cause he is super duper sexy (:

Details! Yum! The ending was perfect, and sort of cliffhanger-y.

Oh, Jake Gyllenhaal...
He's so delicious.

But anyways, this was amazing. I love France. This story was so perfect. Please marry me?
All of the details and descriptions in here are fantastic. I felt like I was there.

God, again with the description. A little more and it would have been too much, but as always, you got it just perfect. I loved the ending too, I'm guessing he left and came back to Paris? Anyways, even though I have no idea who the man is, you can tell I'm in love with this.
AGAIN.

Oh, wow. Your talent for describing things is just astonishing. I love it. <3

Of course Paris and of course Jake. x]
I doubt you can get enough of the smexy guy. He's so cute <3
Btw, silk is so fangirling up there ^ xD

I'm conviced you are going to be one famous gal someday, sweetcheeks.
This story is bursting with talent.

You're an amazing writer, I would say, but that dear, is an understatement. Words cannot describe how wonderful this was. You have a strong, wide vocabulary, something you rarely see on Mibba. I felt as if I was there. I could see everything. And Jake. .he's just gorgeous. Haha.

This is amazing! Holy crap. You're a great writer.

Well then. They all pretty much summed it up. The way you word everything, it just flows. It works. It's something that is hard to find and a lot of people can't do. I also love how you have an open vocabulary. You aren't stuck with 100 words. You have words that open up so much better to the reader. Good work (:

Wow, I mean, everyone else already said everything I wanted to say. You've shown me how great a writer you are just by this piece. The description in here blew me away *.* Keep writing :] Thank you for recommending this piece to me :)

Great God. I loved this. I mean I really loved this. That description was so good it was edible. I have yet to see anyone beat you out in that area. What an attention grabber this was. I was hooked from the beginning. If it was longer I'd subscribe. Really. This was excellent.
And Silk Tea must want to rape you. Haha you used her name. What more could she want.
Jake....I love him..

Of course it would be Paris.
Of course it would be Jake.

Your descriptions; simply phenomenal, as always. I am very jealous right now. xD
You even got the word periwinkle in there. That's talent.

The detailed description was very good.
I enjoyed this story.
You are very talented.

Damn. You f*cling know how to write. That was extremley descriptive and detailed. Even though I couldn't care less about Jake Gyllenhaal, that was still a pretty sweet read.

You're f*ckin talented, hombre.