May 30th, 2015 at 04:01pm
So I stumbled across this so long ago and I just finished reading it. I kind of had to pace myself with this story, and it's taken me a while to figure out why but I finally realize why I did.
It is so... well written.
I am being serious. I have come across so many stories on here with horrible grammar, bad plots, you name it... and to come across a story with this great of writing plus a unique plot is quite remarkable. Like seriously.
I think it also might have taken me a while because of the long chapters, but kudos to that, because when I do find great stories the chapters are usually short which is annoying because I just want to read more but you made refreshingly long chapters and I was able to enjoy it longer. :)
So seriously, you are an amazing writer. This was an amazing story. I don't think I'm going to read the sequel, since it's based off of Kaelee, so it'd be kind of weird for me I think. But that is awesome how you're doing a spin-off based off of her now.
And I realize it's been a while since this has been last updated, but, I just wanted to leave a comment to let you know people are still stumbling across it and enjoying it.
Amazing story once again. I may have to check out some of your other ones. :)
This was an amazing surprise to wake up to. I haven't written in a while, but I've been toying with another idea. We shall see how that ends up going. I'm really glad you love it for all those reasons, because those were part of why I wrote the story the way I did. I enjoy reading longer stories with depth, so I tried to do it with mine.
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. It really made my day