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  • Mr. Darcy

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    Oooh, Jacob forgave Cara.
    Ha, knew it would happen.
    Lmfao.
    September 6th, 2011 at 09:10pm
  • izzylizzy95

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    I love the new layout! Literally like love it. It's perfect
    September 6th, 2011 at 07:00am
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    I can't believe you put this back up! I missed Cupcake Jake greatly and those chapters were just awesome. Also I commend you for being the better person and re-posting the story that I hold so dearly to my soul. And funny bone. can't wait till the next chapter!
    August 3rd, 2011 at 05:55am
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    YOU BROUGHT IT BACK!
    Name change sorta confused me, but whatever.
    And wow Jacob apologised to Joe and vice versa.
    Now the whole Cara business. Nice.
    Lmfao.
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:08pm
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    Wow. Plagiarism. How pathetic can you be to steal someone else's work. Like honestly?
    I hope she get's what's coming to her and I hope it hits hard.
    There is no excuse for what she has done and I hope she gets hell for it.
    On another note; I will be sad to see your wonderful stories go. I have truly enjoyed reading then and I appreciate the time you took to write them. Hopefully you will be able to talk to she who will not be named and find out why she would do something like this. But until then, I hope for the best. And if you ever need to talk to anyone you can always message me. :)
    May 30th, 2011 at 06:33am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Oh shit, someone plagiarised you?
    Oh my fucking god. That's so pathetic of them.
    Taking your hard worked stuff and passing it off as their own.
    They're obviously jealous of your talent; it's why people do it.
    It really fucking sucks that you're no longer posting this up, or the others.
    I really enjoyed them and everything. However, I do understand why you're doing so.
    I hope that bitch gets what she deserves.
    May 28th, 2011 at 10:57am
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    I got so confused when I saw an update for this story on my phone. I was like "I don't remember this at all" and the layout was different and everything. But on the bright side I'm on a computer and got totally pschyed when I noticed that you updated. Soo people thing Cupcake Jake slept with Cara. I love the rumors that are going around.
    April 2nd, 2011 at 07:11pm
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    oh my god! i was thinking of this story today randomly and decided to check if you updated, just for the hell of it.. and you DID! woaah.
    March 31st, 2011 at 11:05am
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    Haha...pottery class, right? Lol, Jacob. :)
    And a rumour spread about Cara and him? Haha, of course Jacob.
    I'm glad you're back with this, I really missed it. :D
    March 19th, 2011 at 11:16pm
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    You already know what I would do if you ever deleted this story. I told you about body I have in the closet right? Well that's the last author who got rid of one of my favourite stories. I'm just saying.
    But no I would cry if you deleted it!!!! I love my Cupcake Jake and Danny Boy, you can't take them away from me!
    November 30th, 2010 at 01:38am
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    NOOO. keep it :)
    November 29th, 2010 at 11:51am
  • izzylizzy95

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    Yeah I get what you mean. Maybe you should just put it on hold and wait until you get some inspiration. It's a good story, but if you're not feeling it then you're not gonna like what you write, thus leading to you never updating. Same thing happened to me on one of my stories and I deleted it which I think is a mistake now. I know now that once I pushed that delete button it was bye bye story for good. If i would have just kept it up I probably would have finished it, but now I think what's the point. So, yeah this is long but basically my advice is don't delete, kept it up but just move on from now and wait for ideas.
    November 29th, 2010 at 05:58am
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    honestly I'm just waiting for you to finish this and write Atone With Me. I like this story too, but it's kind of slow and seems like nothing is happening i kind of just want to get to the end and see who he ends up with .
    November 29th, 2010 at 04:42am
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    I'd cry and scream about how you don't love me anymore if you were to delete this!!!!
    And wow, suckish dinner. But all go for Daniel saying what he thought. Joe was bang out of order!!!
    Still - I'LL BLOODY CRY IF YOU DELETE THIS!! WANT ME TO CRY?!
    Glad that Krystin did realise that it was a stupid thing to do, going over to Jacob's house.
    I love this!
    November 29th, 2010 at 12:21am
  • Cerbera.

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    Oh Jacob, he makes me laugh. He seems like the those obnoxious boys at my school. If I could read their minds, they would probably sound like Jacob. But of course, it's just me.
    Also, I like the fact that you write in present tense. Not many people do that. Actually, it's just me who's stink at writing in present tense.
    Anyway, thanks for recommending your story.
    November 27th, 2010 at 01:25am
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    Oh my goodness, oh my goodness!!(Annie quote FTW)
    I'm just glad you updated. You don't have to rush. And Kristen better back off of Cupcake Jake. He's Cara's.
    And hey, just point these people out to me and I'll do the rest.
    Also Happy Thanksgiving!!!! I think. If your from America.. If not then just ignore this. I wrote a paragraph for a comment before I clicked on your profile.
    November 25th, 2010 at 01:14am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Haha, no, Daniel would never cheat on his girl....never...well, i wouldn't say never...but yeahh.
    Girl trouble....and Jacob is like, what? Um..15? 16? Something like that.
    Lucky mate, lucky!
    I love this!
    November 23rd, 2010 at 08:25pm
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    Haha, Daniel just means bloody well Jacob. Honestly.
    I really do love this.
    November 3rd, 2010 at 06:32pm
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    Cara + Jacob<3
    November 3rd, 2010 at 10:31am
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    I really like how you've started the story out with a boy getting in trouble with the law. It's like something off of a movie, I love it! Jake's personality is hilarious, he doesn't seem all that nervous about much and he tends to go with the flow, that much I can see - well, with the exception of his step dad.

    That's something you always see. A parent that doesn't want to be alone so they marry someone else - or in this case, have a kid first - and the oldest one gets upset. I can understand he's upset, who wouldn't be? I wouldn't worry too much about his step dad though if I were him for the simple fact that if I don't like someone, I just...don't care what they'll say.

    I think I'm basing this comment off of Jake because I really like his character and the laid back way you've portrayed him. He seems to be the highlight of the whole thing for me, or he would be if I had time to read the rest. He's like any other teen struggling with everyday issues at home, and with the law. I think you did a great job here, seriously. I think he's got to be one of the best people I've read about in a while.
    November 2nd, 2010 at 11:17pm