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  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this. Melinda and Jon need to get back together. Jon has to be hurting.
    August 21st, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I'm still pissed at Jon. I want a happily ever after but I also don't want her to forgive him either. And if I were her, I'd be pissed at all those gifts he's sending. So you have a lot of money, congratulations. Try doing something a little more personal. Yeah, I'm still mad. Lol. Update soon?
    August 21st, 2011 at 08:49pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Looking forward to more! <3
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • xLolax

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    I laughed in real life at the stalking part. Maybe Kaner can be the mediator in this situation, although I don't know how someone could get over their partner cheating in time for a wedding.
    August 18th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • bublbabie

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    since he can't seem to remember or figure out why, the first thing that came to mind was that the slutty chick drugged him or something
    August 18th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I love her friendship with Kaner. It's cute. But I'm still pissed at Jon of course, although the stalking thing was kind of cute. I'm wondering if there were hints in this chapter about why he agreed to the arranged marriage in the first place? Anyway, great chapter. Beautifully written. Can't wait for more! :) Especially the wedding because I'm looking forward to your description of it. I love the way you describe certain places and things so stunningly and I want to feel that at their wedding. I'm not sure if that even makes sense. Lol.
    August 18th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the update honey. Jon better figure something out.
    August 18th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • soupy

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    I am loving that this has really affected Jon -that he feels like absolute crap for what he has done to Melinda. HE SHOULD!! There is never a good reason for cheating - jealousy just wont cut it. He has to accept that he screwed up and start trying to find a way to make it up to her.

    I am worried about Melinda staying with Kaner. I really would hate to see her turn to him in a moment of weakness.

    I hope eventually Melinda will allow Jon to repair some of the damage that he has done.

    Great writing!!
    August 18th, 2011 at 12:42am
  • bublbabie

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    wow.. nice going Jon. he needs to find a way to fix this so it is not completely miserable for her since she is still going through with this for her mother. gotta give credit to pat for being so nice and making sure she is OK and by telling Jon what an ass he is. please update this soon.
    August 18th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • xLolax

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    Wow...I give Melinda credit for still going through with the wedding for her mother. I could never lol!

    Awh & Pat was really nice to her. And good for him for telling Jon what an ass he is.

    Update soon!
    August 15th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • ChicagoBlackhawks19

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    intense! please update soon! :)
    August 15th, 2011 at 04:23pm
  • SoliePower

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    *shakes head* Jonny, I dont understand how you could snap your fingers and make it all better. It is gonna take a lot of ass-kissing and sleeping on the couch to fix what you did.
    August 15th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Smooth move Jon.
    August 15th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • soupy

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    It is gonna take a lot of "ass kissing" to get Jonny out of the dog house. He better grovel and grovel big time!! He better make Mel understand that he is truly sorry for what he did - and it wasnt just about him getting caught.

    Thanks for the update - hope to see another really soon. I really enjoy your writing.
    August 15th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Can't wait to see how things go! <3
    August 15th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • k-dubs

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    HAHA Sorry Melinda!
    August 15th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • k-dubs

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    Oh goodness I didn't expect Melanie to do that at all.
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:58am
  • JTCC1950

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    UGH Jon needs to fix this!! I love how Pat it treating her likehe would his sister also. Please update soon!
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:50am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    In the beginning Jon definitely didn't seem sorry enough. Not until he found out that she knew. Typical. What an ass! She deserves so much better. And I love how sweet Kaner was to her. I'm a hardcore advocate for that kid. I just think he is misunderstood. Lol. But anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for more.
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • Kristina W

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    please update soon!!! you have me addicted to this story:)
    August 14th, 2011 at 09:19am