I loved this chapter! Everything about it was just right. From the way the words flowed to the color of the background. Everything just fit and added to the mood of the moment. Amazing. Can't wait to see what happens at this function! :)
the first chapter is amazing. the then and nows, they really are fantastic. and after a win, no one wants to hear bad news, so i feel bad that it was about her mother. that's just terrible. i don't know how i would've handled it, probably like she did, trying harder, pushing herself. and the parts about jonnyy boy, those were great. i really liked them. i don't know where you got the idea for this story, but where ever it came from, keep using them. they are amazing stories and get amazing reviews. keep it up because there is no way that it could not do good.
HOW THE HELL DID MIBBA NOT EMAIL ME FOR THIS UPDATE! SAKDLASD;LSAKD;LKASL;DKAS;L I THINK IT WAS SO HOT IT BROKE THE SERVERS! LOL But wow omg that was so hot. I squeed. I love them so much and i'm so glad that there sleeping together. AND LOOKING AT BRIDAL MAGAZINES! I'm curious about the wedding parties! :P loved it! update again asap!
Love the meeting between Sharp/Abby & Jon/Melinda.