Just got through reading all 25 chptrs and they're pretty good. I'd like a little more detail but I can definitely see the change and improvement between the 1st chptr and now, keep up the good work.
Had to laugh at the imprint between Jake and Alexandria, I've been in Jake and Lily's world for so long it seems odd to think of him with someone else lol ;p
Wonderful update like usual. I really think that Ashley is gonna beat up Bella or atleast get a good punch in. And then after that Alex is gone get on it. That would make me laugh a little. But I do like Bella so I don't know why I am thinking this. Ummm.... my other guess is that Eric shows up and the wovles Aka Paul beat him up.
Hey!!! Great update! Lolz... I was sorta chuckling when I read the part where Alex asked Jake if Ash and Sam were imprints. Lolz... how aweful I would feel if someone asked me if I was my little brother's girlfriend.
can't wait to se more. :]