First off, your welcome! I've seen it happen to too many people to just stand by and say nothing and secondly, that was a great update! Now...by two comments did you mean one..
Love the new update. I like Ash & Paul's date. I especially love the waitress. Bitting down lip & biting the tip of eraser! Lolz... My favortite color is blue too! Sorry.... super random, but yeah... great update!
Hey loved the update! But i don't want you to get reported because i love the story so far so (just a suggestion) you might want to capitalize the title. This story is loved!
Great chapter... although it was sad. Tears in my eyes... poor Ash. And poor Nikki. Nikki's father should be put into jail for life!! I mean, he made Nikki become blind! :( Hope Paul can help Ash!
Aww... cute!!! I really like your plot. :) Hope Paul and Ash get together... live happily ever after. I'm curious about Nikki's father, tho. Must have been some kinda jerk. Keep up the good writing!!!