A Beautiful Moment Amongst The Rain - Comments

Really, just.... wow. I love it so much. This really showed how people really are, and real life problems. I feel the same way (as Tabitha) about certain things. It's like, it shows how teens and adults are silenced because of homophobia. Very nicely written chapter. I loved it.

More soon, por favor?

Really amazing. more soon? :mrgreen:

hey i just wanted to say
this story rocks! i dont think i've read one this gurd!!!
cant wait for more ^^

Very good, as always.
It makes me jealous it's so real. xD

Yeah, I wish my dad was like that...hehe

GREAT UPDATE!!

I like how you sum up what happened in that chapter at the end of every chapter.

Great Update :D

i think this is the best femmeslash i have read and i read loads of them and i mean loads, and i c my girlfriend likes your story as well

Just fucking amazing Sam! I love this story so much! I can't wait for more!

wow! That was great! They made-out! :D

Girlfriends know all!

Wow.....are you sure you're not a bi teenage girl?
You've described it perfectly...this is exactly what happened to me
Except I got called lesbian and dyke
I love it........the best femmeslash I've ever read
Better than mine

Whoa!
They finally kissed!
I loved the way you described it-you're good at femmeslash!
Great work, I loved it

I love this so far but you slipped into 2nd person at one point. You might want to correct that.

Other than that though, I love it.

--- new reader ---

you've structured and written this story well, it makes the reader feel invovled in the story. i love it.

more WHEN you can please.

*subscribes*

:D HELL YEAH!
THEY KISSED! I know how it feels to have all those emotions at once!
Hopefully nothing bad is going to happen....
uh oh.

Great Update! Very long too.

Yes...Dr.phil is the bomb.

:D Update soon?

okay as promised i read the story and let me just say two things; i love u for writing this/in a brotherly way of course and u r a genderbending genius.

love, angie.

PS COME TO MY WEDDING.

I am really in love with this story.
I love the way you describe things-it's almost as if you're inside the mind of a young girl struggling to choose the path of her sexuality
I adore it.....I really do

Damn good update!