Not Your Angel - Comments

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OHMYGOSH it was so good!!!!! I'm so pleasantly surprised by the little twists that came so uniquely and naturally! Everything seemed to fit perfectly together, even the triplets and Marcus. I actually thought the hooded man would have been their father, but I suppose that's close enough. I don't think you should write a sequel, but I do think it would be interesting to write a side story of Arian's life, don't you? I like how the characters had time to develop and the love didn't just pop up and smack everyone in the face. I actually expected Jacob to be a lot closer to Milan than he ended up being, but he served his purpose to bring her into the family, so that's fine I suppose. I enjoyed Reading about Rubi and Nessie a lot because Milan developed such a good connection with them. It's sweet. I rather liked Amari as well- his cheerful Outlook on life was awesome. Too bad it couldn't stick more. I like the part where he lied about Milan being out then laughed as he left, instead of getting mad.

You should really write a sequel I feel like this story shouldn't end just yet it's missing something but I still love it your a great writer

I found this story and I'm glad that I did because it was super amazing!!!!
I loved it!!!!

So I am a little late, I just found this story, It was amazing.
You are a talented writer (:

amazing!
love her dress btw

Loving the story!! Cant wait to read more awesomeness chapters!!!

I loved this story :) can't wait to see more from u :D

awwww thts cute

please write more i love it

wow did not see that coming....awesome update cant wait for more hun

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! i want more! please update soon!!!

wow.... i dont even know what to say.. but amazing twist :)

OMGGGGGG!! HOLY SHITTTTT O___O was totally not excepting this! i THOUGHT SOMEONE WAS GONNA DIEE. Are the twins going to stay? Oh i bet the 3rd one comes and lives with them :O Oh hope so >__< Great Job :DD

wow didn't expect that.
update soon please? :)

same as everyone else
great chapter

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hope to read more soon^_^

i really love this story and i hope you update soon

Well shit now that she's finally happy things go BAM bad :( loved the updates

I can't wait for an update!!!