Finding Magyk - Comments

Another name for someone or something that can see the future is an 'Oracle'. Although for some stupid reason, everytime I think of the word 'orcacle', I think of a giant floating blue gem. .... Yeah, I don't know.

In the mean time, Yay for an update!! And I don't think that this'll be the last we see of Lola.

That font and the fact that I'm attempting to read this at 3:27 in the morning in the dark and on my iPod are the only things stoping me from reading this I'll try copy and pasting this onto word or tweaking my brightness on the computer later so I can have a read :p

great story im subscribing

Mm. I'm pretty fond of it as well. Nice choice, Max.
I've already finished it, just passing it by her first.

Well, that's very good. I rather like the layout!
Now back to work Kris!

Well Artemis didn't feel that was the right thing to do at that present moment in time, for some reason or other I haven't really decided. It's just the way he does things, really.

Ok, so you know how Dante made up lies about Art? About how he gets into fights and stuff? I'd tell Max that my brother doesn't like me, and he beat me up. There! Get her hating and not trusting Dante, getting her closer to me because she feels pity and not telling a lie! Booyah!!

Boo, update again.

Hah hah. Love the quotes.^^ Yes, we are re-writing it, improving it. Silly Max :P

Thanks, spent days on the names...Yep, will update soon, working on next few installments now. XD

Will sooooon very soooooon

i like both the names! :D
update soon!

Kyyyyymmm~ In the first chapter after you edited it, you skipped the bit at the beginning where Max had that dream and told herself Magyk wasn't real! Is that important? I just thought, 'cause it was missing, that you skipped it by accident. 'Tis missing!

WE BOTH WRITE IT -by Max

Thanks Tech, we found names though XD Can I tell her what they are Max? (I'm calling you that now, you should call me Artemis lol) Yeah, it will have magic in it...

cool, i'm definitely interested to read more. But... will it actually have magic in it? 'Cause...uh... I have a thing about magic. But oh well... nice so far.

P.S No, i'm terrible at coming up with last names. I always go with Rene, or Jamison, or...uh... ok, I can't think of anything else. One time(when I first started writing. I think I was 10 or 11) I named my character Loli Silkstream. I kind of like it. No one else has a name like it. LOL.But I choose much better names now.

_TECH_

meeh you helped still

No I didn't, like one paragraph.

You did alot too Krys!!!!!

Cool! Finally got it up there, the main characters names aren't mentioned though, because we didn't know when we wrote it. Will be mentioned later though! I should start work on the next chapter, huh, Kym? I'll do that now. Thanks ya'll for reading our story! (Though it was mainly Max Ryde, I didn't do crud)