Sweet Innocence - Comments

please update

wow I love this it has great description and detail please update soon

Update soon please? I love it :3

Woooah!! Yhu so have to add more...subscribing

I like Axel :)

Finally update =) maybe I'm a sick person but I kinda find Axel's dark side a bit attractive......

update...:)

more!more!
alex should be a little sweet to him:D
update?
and i forget what the old layout used to loookl ike so i dnt know which i like better:D haha

Awh, poor baba Couver! I really dislike this Axel character. He shouldn't have been so rough :(
Maybe Couver might not have fought as much. It kind of kills me.

I really, really love this.
It shows a darker side of the incestuous relationship <3

Even if it took me a couple weeks to read.
ILOVEIT!!! UPDATE MY DEAR CATERPILLAR :D
It's amazing!!! <3

Oooh, I love it! I'm into S&M myself more of a sadist but celibacy is my world now! But let big bro have his fun then stockholm baby bro into it! I love the story no complaints here! I won't kill u this time but next time??????!!!!!!!<333

awwwww soo amazing

Can you please update more often?
It makes me sad when you don't.
D:

I agree with the comment above :) You should really write some more. You're a good writer :)

you know what would be sooooooooo amazing?
if you wrote more of this:D
it woudl be the most awesomese thing ever!!!!
so you should:D

MORE!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!!
love it, sad but really good

This is twisted. In a good way. I couldn't ask for more. :)

More please?

I really like this you should comment me when you update

Ya you decided to write it into a story!!
I can't wait for more, keep updating =D