Sweet Innocence - Comments

another chapter would be nice:D

Wow poor couver axels an ass can't wait to see what happens update plzzzzzzzzzz

Axel is a douche bag! Write more!

This is sick.. like disgusting.
Yet I couldn't stop reading.
& Yes, I love the name Couver too!
Update puhlease. <3

-jamie

hmmm.....methinks couver will start to like axel? at least i hope:D haha

and i freaking love the name Couver. it's awesome.

more soon?

I Loveeee this story:D ! And I agree you should write more like this lol ! ^_^ x:sage

You should make a story out of this!!!!
I love this short story it's amazing but I really wanna see how Alex does to His little bro =3
So whatcha think a story????
I love the oneshot by the way the best one I have ever read and I read it 5 times already

i giggled in a sadistic fashion when he said "turns out blood makes a fine lubricant"

o wow xP amazing writing not the best thing for the sexually harassed paranoid girl to read before bed

OMG alex is an ass!!
but the weird thing is i want to c wat happens next!!!

nice lol

Lol, I enjoyed that. :D
I wasn't really expecting Axel to do that, but yeah. 'Twas interesting. x]
Great job on it. ^-^

I also subscribed

I felt so bad for Coover. Axel's an asshole now. This is a really good short story though and I still want to know what happens next.

Lol the subscriber was me. I wanted to read the next chapter :) I really liked this!! Fantastic job. This would be cool as a novel too. I hope you win the contest for this story!:D

please update!!!!

Please continue!!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!!! I just hate short stories like these because they're always so good and finish before I want them too. PLEASE update soon!!!! <333