January 30th, 2017 at 03:17am
Oh heyyy, I'm so happy you saw my comment! :D
That's understandable, it's awesome to see that you're even just considering it. It means a lot; usually people never see my comments or if they do, never respond, so I'm glad that you saw mine and that's really all I can ask you to do, is consider it. :) Take your time.
So yeah, I'm still here as you can see, even a year later, lol. :) I may have to review it again myself since it's been a while and I tend to read a lot, but I'm excited to hear you may continue it. :)
Anyways, I just finished with all of it plus the new updates. And I love it even more than I did the first time. :D
Oooh... I loved how steamy it got between them with chapter 12. ;) That whole speech though... so sweet. Yesss, I'm so happy they made up, somewhat. Idk if it's fully there yet but it's getting there.
So sad with what's happening with Lola's mom though, aw. :(
As for things you could look to cover with the rest of the story, something I'm wondering after reading it again... what happened with Lola's escort job? Did she quit? Is she still using time off? Some drama that could come in could possibly be with her boss, Clay, who seemed to be in love with her and after reading about that, honestly doesn't sound like he would let her go too easily.
Another thing to maybe be explained would be Alex saying what really happened that night Lola left and broke up with him. Did he really cheat on her that night? Was it all just a big misunderstanding? Was that girl, Chris, really his 'friend', and does he still talk to her? A lot of ways you could approach that problem again in the story. Because, if anything, that's probably the main thing to still be resolved between them. I think it would be good if Lola actually took the time to listen now that they've reconnected.
Also, what's going on with the band? Maybe a tour could be coming up, or something? You briefly mentioned how he was recording, so how will Lola react when he goes on tour? Maybe she'll go with him?
Maybe you already had some of these ideas in mind, but just thought I would leave feedback on what I'm currently wondering about. Just in case you were wondering what to cover next. :)
But I'm so glad you're back with this story, yes. It means so much that I inspired you to update, thanks for the shout-out. :)
And now that I'm caught up, hopefully it won't take me long to read each update. :D Hope to see you continue with it. Would love to see more Lola and Alex cuteness. :)