This story was so sad, but incredibly well written. Like Audrey T said, it’s really impressive how you put so much into so few words; it really did seem like a full story as opposed to just a random moment in time. I feel so sorry for that man the entire time but that last line really made me feel for him – his love and his child? Absolutely tragic. The banner was really nice and I liked the coloring of the story layout even though it didn’t necessarily match the colors in the picture. I also liked that instead of a man walking out on his girlfriend while she was pregnant it went the other way which is a nice twist and very refreshing.
August 19th, 2010 at 03:08am