We Were Lost and Broken Until We Met You Guys - Comments

This was so good! I really like the plot, keep up the good work :D it was really good <3
if you like nick jonas I have a storie I think you would like. Read once in a lifetime and tell me what you think! :D / love kahlan

Hurry for Cissy for getting us back on track! I think it's my turn in the rotation... Let's hope I can come up with something as amazing as that :)

Francis, thAt chapter was really good. Really, really good. Im very proud of you. Way to get the ball rolling again! :D

Yay!! An update! :D
Loved the new chapter!
Aw... Francis, why'd you push Nick away? :( Forget about the cliques; love is more important. :) I really hope you/she(lol, I'm not sure how to refer to your character) realizes the mistake and apologizes to Nick. :( Aw...
Great update, though! Glad to see another update for the story.
Oh, and note: I just now realized this, but you guys spelled Until like 'Untill' in the story title. lol. You have one extra 'l'. Minor mistake, it'll take you 2 seconds to fix. lol. No biggie, other than that, you're golden. :)
Can't wait for the next update! :D

Last update was Amazing, Awesome, and just overall GREAT. With that said good job Bree.The last chapter really made me feel for Bree, because of the issue she is going through. But I just feel good that she has somebody there for her that is concerned for her even though she acts like she does not want them there. XOXO Update soon!!

Why thank you, Jenna. It's always lovely to see your comments.
And thanks Heavy Heart;; for your comment too! :D Francis is hopefully going to update soon. :]

Loved the update! You did an amazing job with it Bree, really. :D Aw, so now we know not only Katherine has some drama, but Bree does as well. :( Hm... and I'm not sure if Francis does yet, she lost her parents, but... I hope she doesn't have anything else terrible going on. :( I feel sorry for all of them. Great job with the update! I loved how Kevin was concerned about her... it was cute, and just shows what a caring person he is. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I love this story :)
It's really, really good :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon please :)

sweer disaster; dude, I love your signature! Haha it's one of my favorite quotes of Jacob from THE WHOLE SERIES! :P And I'm glad you LOVE the story. Me and my co-authors really appreciate it. And I'm sure Francis is going to update as soon as she's finished with her chapter. :]

I love this story!! It's really good.
At first I didn't think I would like it, but I LOVE it!!
It's different :) I LOVE the banner and I LOVE this story!!
You guys better update soon!! Please??

Why thank you my friend/co-author. :] I know, I'm excited for what Francis is going to post. Oooooooooh! :D I think it's funny and scary how much Leslie and Sam influence us and how much control they have over our whole way of life. They sure are poopoo heads! >:P

Awesome chapter Bree :)
I hope you got my message.
Poor you has to go through because of our so called friends && my so called father.
Can't wait to see what our Francis has in store for us :)

<3

Kat, I forgot to tell you something in my comment above: THANK YOU for helping set me up in your chapter for MY chapter. To be honest I was a little lost on what to write next. You can message me (don't want to spoil it for the readers!) with details that are goin on behind the scenes or things the readers don't know YET so I can make my chapters flow with yours and Francis'. You are awesome, Francis is awesome, the readers are awesome, and I am somewhat awesome. Mostly I'm weird, but oh well. :P Love ya girly! And I'm glad we're getting back into the story!

I can't wait to see what Bree writes either. *Gives guilty face* Gah, I'm sorry I'm the late one to post. I'm so busy. My teachers should know that I have stories to write and people to reply to. :P Jenna, how could anyone hate you? You're full of awesomeness! And so are you, Kat! YOWZA. Really good chapter. I don't think I'll come close. Hopefully my chapter will be good, too! :D

So yeah can I say, amazing! I was amazed by how beautifully it was written. But there's one thing I don't get, why is her dad only hitting her? I know it hasn't been stated yet but I figured.

I felt bad when the boys knocked on the door and the dad practically growled at them. And then at the beach when Kat told Joe to leave her alone, leaving him confused.

Amazing chapter, and I can't wait to read what Bree writes :D

Loved the update! Aw, poor Katherine. :( I think I have an idea with what's going on... :( Her dad is mean! :(
Hm... but I wonder if she'll ever let Joe in? Great update, and can't wait for the next one! :D
And now... I feel embarassed, lol. Like, you guys said you didn't mind about me giving the suggestion, but I just... naturally feel that way, I guess. Hopefully no one will hate on me for saying that, lol. But I can't wait to see where you take the new idea. It will be AMAZING; I know it. :D
Lovely update Katherine! Can't wait for your's Bree! :D

Yeah, it's great that you have an opinion Jenna :)
We need criticisim not just "good chapter" comments so thank you!

Jenna, you're totally fine, don't even worry about it. Express your thoughts! I love to hear what you have to say about the story in all honesty. My friend was writing a poem and he had me read it and asked if I had anything to say. I told him no. He said, "Come on, give me criticism! If no one ever gave any criticism all the books in the world would SUCK!" I'm sure my co-authors don't mind it either. It helps in the long run and we know you're not being mean, you're being helpful. :]

Yay, an update! Loved the new chapter! :) The only thing is, though, is that... it seems to be getting a little repetitive. Like, I feel like they've been at that party forever. lol. But that's because you wrote it in each of their pov's, and I don't mind it, really, but... it's just a thought. Gosh, just ignore me, I feel horrible now. :( Other than that factor, though, this story is seriously great so far, and I can't wait to see what you have happen next! :D Ignore my comment if you wish... it's just a thought.