Why won't Melanie just leave Draco alone and be with Harry? It's the most obvious, decent choice. Oh, well. :P Thanks for updating. Please update again soon. :D
Why won't Melanie just leave Draco alone and be with Harry? It's the most obvious, decent choice. Oh, well. :P Thanks for updating. Please update again soon. :D
I really like this, it's good so far, but there are a few things:
The dark layout, you may want to reconsider, I cannot read the story unless I highlight everything, and that is kind of annoying after a while.
Melanie and Harry are in their first year of hogwarts, they are eleven years old. I do not think they would be making our or anything when they are so young.
i know he's an asshole but i will continue reading and hoping for more parts with draco and that he magically starts loving her! plus, harry's pretty okay in this story and that's saying a lot for me because i don't normally like him. great story! <3
I love this story so much! I don't find many Harry Potter fanfics that I actually stick with, but I love this one. Draco is very believable. You both write amazingly well together. I wouldn't have known this was written by two different authors if it didn't tell me so. You guys write amazing together.