Amazing chapter, I must say. Very interesting so far[: I can't wait to see what kind of effect this'll have on their relationship, because right now, I'm not sure I can predict what's going to happen between them.
Omg, omg, omg, omg, omg. Did I just see a dedication to me at the end of chapter three? Honey, you flatter me. I don't know what to say. Next chapter of mine, is ALL TO YOU! That is, when I eventually update.
still reading..just thought i'd comment before i forgot everything. First of all, this is a good start! I haven't read a lot but honestly...it sounds a little cliche.. =/ idk. haven't read a lot. I'll tell you what i think when im done :D You guys are really talented writers! Just go back and edit. Sorry if im being a little harsh...i wanna help you! Read it aloud.i couldn't find a lot of mistakes! Maybe add a little twist to the story?
yah know....this chapter made me think: i've never been to olive garden before :O hahha, other than that....awesome chapter ;D ooh yaah, i subscribed xO sooo i'm waiting for dah next one ^-^
Anyways, its good. Update soon(;