The Heart Never Lies - Comments

Wow! I just finished reading the first 3 chapters. I really liked it! It's cute and relatable. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Just a little advice: be careful with past a present tense. It's easy to switch on accident and it happened once or twice in your story. Easy fix though. =D

Beyond that, I like it!

"I can't believe I have never had this in my mouth" (or something like that)
Five words: That'swhatshesaid! XD

Hayden is like,
The epitome of awesomeness.
Did I spell that right?
I hope I did.
Update Update Update!!
Please?? =p

I love the story!
You all are great at writing :D
Looking forward to more coming out darlings :D

awwh hayden and daniel made just good friends...
i hope they dont linger away from each other for good Dx

I love the story
you both wrote
really well too
Excited for more!!!

NOOO. I wanted first comment, lol.
Well, you guys both did a fantastic job.
Very talented, very talented.
I want to read more, woots.
I'm subscribed!

FIRST COMMENT!
Well let me say, this is a brilliant story.
This is the only story I have and going to ever subscribe that is OFC for both!
You guys need to update soon :DDD