Ahhhhmazzinnggg. I just read all 20 chapters and you should so totally write more. I got addicted haha. And i absolutely Adooreee Eddy and he blue teddy bear.
I just started reading this story. I have only read the first chapter and let me tell you, I absolutely love your writing style! I love how your dialogue isn't too rushed (which I seem to be guilty of) and the beginning told me enough of what I needed to know for the story. It wasn't confusing like most beginnings you read. I'm excited to keep on reading!
yes yes yes!!!! Just a lovesick boy is back and ready for action! I got sooooooo mad when adrians dad came back and was all like, oh, so something for me even though I haven't done anything for you since you were six! I wanted someone to punch him!!!! You definetly know how to evoke lots of emotions in me. It's kind of scary, actually... Oh well! I love reading this and I can't wait for another update!