i loved the beginning of this chapter, it was amazing...this story is definitely well written i must say...definitely suscribing and can't wait to see where this goes! more when you can please?! =]
^_____^ I stole your comment virginity! XD Anywho, I love this very muchly. It's really well-written, and I could place myself immediately into the setting. <---[me applauding you for that] *subscribes* More soon?