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  • lisablackrose

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    That was hot, I loved it.x
    March 7th, 2008 at 12:01pm
  • Melissa Jane

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    OMG soo hot!

    GRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrr im a fish
    March 2nd, 2008 at 06:12am
  • frank.

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    Tell me why I never read your work before ? :tehe:
    Jesus. I missed out on great times. Shifty
    February 16th, 2008 at 07:40pm
  • M451n

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    this actualy makes me think of this song By the Screechng Weasels called supermarket fantasy....
    February 11th, 2008 at 03:23am
  • Blank Nothing

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    HOT.

    that's all i need to say. =)
    January 18th, 2008 at 06:41pm
  • Little red rose

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    awesome Ripley
    i was delaying reading that cause i knew it would be brilliant and so cheer up times
    is when you read brilliant stories!
    lol
    libby :D
    January 4th, 2008 at 04:45am
  • das nadine.

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    omfg .

    I hate you for being so damn good at writing , miss ripley.
    GOD.
    :tehe:

    I loved it.
    January 3rd, 2008 at 06:57pm
  • Paint It Black

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    That was hot and well-written and just awesome. And I love the last line.
    January 3rd, 2008 at 02:42am
  • Chibi

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    *insert Gerard-style stage moans here*
    December 30th, 2007 at 12:37am
  • MCRxFamousLivingDead

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    You know, i will never be able to look at aisle 4 the same way again....or any part of a supermarket for that matter.
    i loved it
    <33
    December 29th, 2007 at 05:33pm
  • t'lema

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    mcrmom:
    You know, for a minute there I was convinced they actually knew each other and were sort of role-playing at being strangers.

    "Do you trust me?" That bit was hot.
    That's EXACTLY what I thought.

    I thought it was a fun role play thing too. But this worked too.

    I kind of melted. (Yes I'm back in the internet cafe, I'm 'working' XD)

    Much love my Ripley.
    December 28th, 2007 at 11:45pm
  • Cobweb.

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    Oh god the last line is perfect!
    I love the whole thing! Though I'm not sure I could ever not like any of your work...
    Very steamy i must say!
    You should write more two shots haha
    December 28th, 2007 at 11:10pm
  • I'll_Be_Back

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    Oh that was so cool and very different.

    It was nice and sweet and not tragic! lmao very well done to you .x
    December 28th, 2007 at 05:45am
  • EmuVampire

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    Omfg. That was so hot!
    Brilliant!
    Oh God I wished that kinda stuff would happen round here! XD
    Gah you are such an awesome author.
    <3333
    December 27th, 2007 at 08:32pm
  • mcrmom

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    You know, for a minute there I was convinced they actually knew each other and were sort of role-playing at being strangers.

    "Do you trust me?" That bit was hot.
    December 27th, 2007 at 11:40am
  • mein herz brennt

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    amazing
    December 27th, 2007 at 06:15am
  • lizzicleromance

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    Ooooh baby! That was so damn amazing!!! Def. one of my favorite one-er, two-shots. It was sexy, funny, well-written... and mind-blowingly awesome.

    Amazing work :D

    *EDIT: Page claim! :D*
    December 27th, 2007 at 03:33am
  • Mad Porno Action

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    That was awesome! Love the humour at the end! Congrats honey xxx
    December 27th, 2007 at 02:55am
  • Captain John Hart

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    Amazing second part.
    But the frist part was amazing too so it was all amazing!
    This is one of the best two-shots I have read.
    You are an amazing write and don't you ever stop!
    December 27th, 2007 at 02:39am
  • ChocolateDogBites

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    Ahww.. I though that was cute
    That ended nicely
    Whever I go in a grocery store now I'm going to think of this story xD
    December 27th, 2007 at 12:37am
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