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oh :shock: *fans myself*
need part 2 before I go pop

wow, loved it =D more please.. *subscribes*

you captivated every second perfectly and i think i lost myself somewhere
lol
i loved it
libby:D

My God. That was.... hot.

I think your story just sweated out my fever.

Can't wait for more!

HOTT!
Now all the readers are going to have high hopes the next time they pass through their frozen foods section. If only...

wowww..sexyyy haha.

If that was really happening in a grocery store..I would like..cheer them on xD

More pleaseee sooooon!

OMG was that hot. Totally, totally hot. My only problem is I don't like public restroom sex. I think it is nasty. It won't keep me from reading and enjoying the second installment though I'm sure. I know that you will have a way of describing it so that I will forget it is a restroom and focus on the delicious Frerard.

ah, this was so good!
man, if this happened to me groccery shopping, i would be pretty exited haha.

wow...just more proof that you're amazing. xD
haha; if this went on at MY grocery store - i'd get a job there.
as much as i'd want to be the random person walking around;
i think being on the micrphone would be the most fun. ;D

well anyway, i loved this and can't wait for the second part.

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Awesome story line.

We all know if that went on in our grocery shops, we'd be down there everyday.

OOOOHHH I like this!!

more soon pretty please???

Ha! Frank and Gerard making out in the grocery store. I would love to see that.
But I'm sure if sercuity didn't come they would of have done it right there! Not that I would complain..
But I really like this story
I can't wait for part two!

Mad Porno Action:

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Agreed ^ ^
More Please This Is So Good...
Your Like The Best Writer In The Whole Mibba Website...

MORE PLEASE...

More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more and if you didn't get the message MORE WOMAN!!!!! *subscribes*

Stupid MF:

"ATTENTION,SHOPPERS! AMAZING FRERARD GOING ON IN AISLE 4. GET THERE BEFORE MIBBA READERS DO!"

Now, that was amazing, Ripley. Everything you write is just love.

I loved that, it made me smile.

but, that first part made my atmosphere freaking steamy.
i'm feeling, a little hot right now.
XD
I swear, there is nothing better than having a little dirty fun in the frozen food section. Especially if you go by the name of Frank and Gerard.
but seriously, this story has my girl boxers falling down in anticipation. It had me giggling and gasping the whole way through.
pleaseee update. I can't wait!

I need the second part of this story.

yeaya. . .

Poison Tree:

*melts*

You know what I think you missed?

Old lady: : *faints*
Teenage girls: *drool*
Old Lday: My eyes!! They burn!!!

........or something.

^^Haha that would have been funny if any of that had happened.

Amazing. Can't wait for more *subscribes*
Why can't something like that happen to me when I go shopping?
I know why cause if it did there would be no good stories/ ideas on mibba

mayme_moo:

Woahhhhh.
I think I need a cigarette.
Or a boyfriend lol, one or the other...or both.

Fuck I wish my food shopping ended up like that I'd be in fucking heaven. This is so very smuttish and not deep in anyway but fuck is it hot and I want more!

As always amazing writing!

^^^I totally agree

Woahhhhh.
I think I need a cigarette.
Or a boyfriend lol, one or the other...or both.

Fuck I wish my food shopping ended up like that I'd be in fucking heaven. This is so very smuttish and not deep in anyway but fuck is it hot and I want more!

As always amazing writing!