Caged Mentality - Comments

i like eli :D
and i really like the layout

*thumbs up*

awwh don't be pissed at Greg, he really is a good guy! He's just misunderstood. Poor Greg :(

even though i know its both their faults and stuff but i am getting more pissed at Greg then anything else

I love this, can't wait for more

Oh, just remembered. There is a reason Greg is being such an ass in this besides the fact that he is drunk. He does honestly care about Riel. But he is very upset that Riel is cutting again. He knows now it was something to do with Kris that caused him to get depressed and therefore he's cutting again.

He doesn't like to blurt out to people that Riel cuts, but he was making it a point that because of Kris (in Gregs mind) he is cutting again. He's being an ass to Kris because he thinks that. He was purposely making Kris feel bad over it. Hopefully making his pain as bad as Riel's was. He feels that Kris is adding to Riel's problems.

Haha, sorry Gabe :P I'm actually not any good with fight scenes, especially not when someone else plays the other character involved. Not that it really has to be like that, I mean, we do write the story like that originally, but then rewrite it. I suppose I could just write the whole fight scene if there does end up being one. :]

Yes, Adrian is Cable's father, we were excited to see who would catch it. xD So good job people :D

Well Greg is just an ass when he's drunk xD he hates change. He may seem bad but he's really a good guy. You'll see in the end.

we may add cable more, depends. We didn't expect so many people to like him xD but if you guys want more of him we can add more.

alright!!!! uppdate <3

dude! that was cable's daddy!

Holy crap! Is Adrian Cable's dad? It kinda sounded like he could be. Hmm, guess Greg's not as great of a guy as he seemed last chapter. I'm not so sure I like him as much now that I've seen this selfish side of him. I'm impress with how well Kris was able to keep his temper wile arguing with Greg. I can't believe Greg just told him about Riel's cutting. That's not right, cutting's something that's really personal. I know Kris isn't just some random guy but that was still a really low blow. Hope there's more soon! <3

Random, I'm the only dude reading this story, and I'm not gay. But, hey, its well written. Uhm, anyways, I was hoping for a fight, you did a good job at building anticipation. If there is a fight scene, I bet you will do a good job writing it. But, yeah, kinda let me down with no fight, but hey, it was for a reason. Keep on

Hey, comment again. Nice to see more of a side from my favourite minor character, Mr Larkin, but....enough of that. Both chapters were excellent, but chapter 8 really kinda hit a personal spot of mine. I could relate to the Cable kid, and his issues with his dad. Although I handled things differently than he did. But, cant wait to see how things unfold. Especially with Kris' parents.

*subscribes* :) i think its cuute
they shud get together now :(
i like cable.. is he gona b in the story more?
update please? <3

This is some really good stuff. I like the name Cable. Greg's a really good guy. Riel's lucky to have someone like him around. Hope there's more soon! <3

*subscribes*

chapter 8 was a bit sad, but it had to be done, ugh why can't he just see it, i hope he gets better, and they well yea, and kris's mom, omg i don't like her i wouldn't blame kris for getting mad........i hope she gets better though

I really enjoyed reading chapter eight. It gave more information on Riely (sorry if i misspelled his name lol). It made him seem more real then you had already made him to be. It's good to see that it's not just one charecter who has his demons and that it's not easy to deal with them.

All aspects of this story just seems to draw me in. Probably because of how well written it is and how many people are able to have some connection to it.

I look foward to reading more <3

lols yay! cable feels the love :3

**PAGE CLAIM!**

i like cable :)

Yeah, I think he's the most fun for me to write when he's angry xD
Thanks guys, i always look forward to your comments :]