Jeez Gabriel, you always gotta say something mean! :( Haha. I didn't expect Mr. Larkin to be anyone's favorite, but okay. xD I'll put him in it more in chapter seven. Be excited.
I couldve eaten Alphabet soup and crapped out a better story! Haha, just kidding. My favourite is Mr Larkin. Uhm, one, I like minor characters, and two, ive always liked the fatherly figure characters. Im not a fan of slashes, but this is suprisingly great. Keep up the good work!
i am loving this so much, i can' wait to read more of it, that second chaper was, getting a bit moe hot, i only hope they see it, and he gets better with his mom