Thank you for writing. I love this. Its like seeing in someone's mind. Your an amazing writer. Keep at it. I love you. As crazy as it sounds, These chapters keep me sane.
umm, hey? So like why is this.... Inactive? Please keep writing? For me? That one person who lives for reading things like this. The one who can so closely relate to everyone of you characters. Please? I'm begging. I don't ever beg.
GAH. I thought you had gone and died on me, but then I see all these updates that I never got emails for. Yeah. Shoot me.
At least, I had a lot of reading to do - a lot of mindblowing, lunatic, scheming, 'making-me-speechless'-writing. So yeah. Keep going, and next time, I'll be sure to check the story page instead.
Fuck me, that was spectacular. The whole scene keeps playing in my head now. It almost hurts. I can feel how my night is going to be filled with this nightmare now... I love it.
Thank you - I'll finish off with the longest comment, then.
Well honestly, I never saw any sense in this. I just enjoyed your writing, the torture you use on your characters. It gives this sort of feeling that they're alive, even though it's in a sick way.
I loved his one, as always. I don't want you to end this. Even though it doesn't make any sense to me at all, I see every chapter as a detachment from the others.
Ugh. This one was sad.. But again, very well written. You just need to be careful of the there/their/they're-thing. Sometimes, you mix them up - other than that, it was perfect. Your words are harsh, your sentences short.
Oh dear Lord, I can't believe how happy this chapter was. You seem very bipolar to me, darling. But I'm glad something good happened to Glen, finally. And I like how this unfolds. So keep it going.
I can't believe how you can have so few commenters. It's just me. They don't know what they're missing. This feels like mind-raping. You know exactly what we're thinking.
You have a laptop right? Well, is the percentages what your battery level is at when you write these?