Typewriters in the Attic - Comments

It's finally found. My refuge... Please don't stop writing. Ever. Well..I dunno. -A fan

Your out of your mother fucking mind.... but I do enjoy that. >:)

Maybe put the character's name in the beginning or slyly mention them at the bottom?
I like it.

...His name is Clyde.
And your grammar is atrocious.
But this is amazing.

This makes me feel so sane!
I think i'm in love!

I absolutely love this. Its so original and interesting. Please continue!

You need to capitalize everything in your title.

*Slow Clap* It's really relatable to someone with bipolar disorder...Among many other mental illness' but I can't speak for them.

You completely feel the intense emotions of the character and sense her confusion, distress, pain, depression, self-loathing, ect...It's amazing the different moods you've created with such abstract story telling.

Oh, ho ho. Wonderful. Your mind. Don't worry, you're better than her.

Amazing. I know this is chaotic, I know this isn't supposed to make sense, but every word sounds like something you stole from an amazing human mind. It's like you are professing a creepy kind of honesty with these pieces. The pain behind it is strong, but I can sense hope too.

Whether or not if this is supposed to be based off of you, a friend or whatever, your accuracy is scary. I crave your intelligent concepts. Please continue.

okay, i love this story, but i do have one issue with it. i have no idea where it's going, and what it means. now don't get me wrong, a little mystery is a-okay. but i would like to know, are the percents supposed to represent different characters? or how well the main character is coping that day? the inner monologue, though emotionally revealing, witty, and well placed, doesn't provide much insight into the actual going-on's of the story. could you be a little more specific? i'm not saying to dumb it down, just maybe to reconsider what the story is doing as a whole, and how your readers see it.

I really like reading this ~

The short description made me laugh.
The actual story is very lovable.
I'm subscribing.

i actually really loved this. it's just this messy sort of paranoia that goes perfectly with the way you've presented the character. the last line really pulled together a great first impression.

This is really good. It's chaos and like being in some one's mind. It would make a good performace arts piece.