A Melody from the Heart - Comments

loved the update

lovely update. their first kiss was so cute! loved the audience reactions. ;D...I'm surprised that Brian didn't put in his 'input' on the kiss.

oh...and I loved how you pulled in the story of Jimmy doing a handstand on the subway. classic Jimmy moment. :D

Can't wait to see what is next for Audrey and Matt.

Your first and second time in Times Square is very enjoyable, but after the third time, you get bored of it. All the lights and attractions aren't as exciting as they were. A lot of people love NYC, but I don't find anything that wonderful about it. The one place I like, even a little is The Village.

Aw she's cute! She doesn't even realize Matt has been hesitating with kissing her because he wants her to stick around and that she won't block him out like she's done to others.

They kissed! Oh. My. God. Finally!

AAAHH!!
That was so cute, and so amazing, and just ugh!
SOO adorable <3
Update Soon! <3

They KISSED!!!!! :D
I'm so excited that they'll be doing it again soon!
Poor Zacky! Boy doesn't like heights, lol
And as for Jimmy... He's so great with kids, lol

iwillwaitforthecd. iwillwaitforthecd. I WILL WAIT FOR THE CD!

*takes deep calming breath*

alright. im good.

so, i was reading, and i started tearing up. I think mostly because im PMSing, but also because i've convinced myself Audrey is going to die, and i REALLY REALLY dont want her to. damn it! im tearing up again!

Only one little mistake. “I’m starting to think the guys aren’t so bad,” Ellie said, smiling.
Don't worry. I think we all know what it's like to get too used to writing with a specific character. (;

Other than that, this chapter was great. It made me smile so freaking much. I adore Jim in it. The reference to the subway incident made me giggle, and I danced quite a bit when Matt and Audrey finally kissed. :D

I'm so glad that she's getting closer to the boys. Brian needs to suck everything up and deal with Audrey, and then all will be well in the world.

I love this so much. I clap every time I get an update for it. (:

wow love it. they are so cute

great update

I loved this update!!! I can't wait til the next, its reallllyyy good, keep it up!!!!

ahh! I know I read your other stories and always comment on them. But I just got a bit behind on this story. But this is amazing! I loove it! Like I may have said before, im not a Shadows girl, but this is gooooooood. <3
Keep it up!

Aw she decided he's going to take her on a date! That's cute. I didn't think she would like to date anyone since they couldn't handle her rough exterior and because she's so devoted to her music.

He gave her such good compliments and was such a gentleman on their date. He's sucking up so badly, but it's cute how he wants to try to make everything perfect for her.

Wow, I feel bad for her. She doesn't have any love for her parents and they don't have any for her. She really has no one except for herself. Everyone has a person or people they can lean on in times of distress, but Audrey doesn't. =/

This is very well written, i like it.
hopefully you update soon?

OKAY. Sorry, I kind of took a break from reading for a little bit, so I caught up tonight.

The Brian chapter was great. Their little volume war left me grinning sideways and squirming. I love the tension between those two, mostly because it's real, true, angry tension, none of that sexual stuff. (; The awkward celebration was written well. I like the fact that you stayed true to the band, how Audrey just kind of hung back and Matt almost forgot about her because he was a little too busy partying with his best friends. I think that's very realistic. (:

As for this last chapter, it was very nice. She opened up a bit to both Matt and herself. The last line was freaking killer. I'm still smiling, actually. They can both be so smooth and easy around each other in one moment, then totally awkward in the next. I think that's great.

Can't wait for more. (: I absolutely adore this story.

so, fabulous as usual.

Tired, right. Is there an illness that made Audrey's night so long? hmmm... MMMMMMMM, Matt. that boy is scrumptious!

...just thought i'd throw that out their... you know, in case you didn't know...

aww. their date went so well. They are so cute.

It is so true that opposites do attract. They have so much to talk about because they come from such diverse backgrounds.

oh, and I chuckled when she was getting the VIP treatment when he is the rockstar. that was really cute, I'm sure it is refreshing for Matt though, as he (I am sure) is not use to really strong, independent, and sometimes stubborn women.

Can't wait to see their day in the city together. I have a feeling that fun with ensue with the boys. I'm sure Jimmy is going to be crazy and a riot, and I can feel some more Brian grumpiness on the way.

loved the update

loved the update

i like that she said yes to their date!!!! it wasnt all over the place.... i like this chapter....

-giggles- they are adorable together.