And All the Electric Stars Are Shining - Comments

Slap Happy Bullet:

eek
completely cute
and here comes the sun was the perfect song for this chapter. i listened to it as i read, and it fit the mood so perfectly. i could just see the golden light floating around mike's bedroom like a new beginning... it was wonderful and so real.

and i like how you made this just sort of a break, nothing particularly crazy or new. you let us (the readers) see the relationship before the real drama kicks in.
i'm just so sad for billie... he has too much love to go around, huh?

nicely done and you know i cannot wait for another installment.
you are a great writer, my friend.

I loves you, Kristina. hehe.
and yes, Billie just has too much love to give.

Pestilence.:

This story is just completely adorable and amazing :]
more soon!!<3

most defo.
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Slappy Jo:

I like that song. :D

The Beatles.:D:D:D

O__O
*waits for more*

One of the best.
^_^

eek
completely cute
and here comes the sun was the perfect song for this chapter. i listened to it as i read, and it fit the mood so perfectly. i could just see the golden light floating around mike's bedroom like a new beginning... it was wonderful and so real.

and i like how you made this just sort of a break, nothing particularly crazy or new. you let us (the readers) see the relationship before the real drama kicks in.
i'm just so sad for billie... he has too much love to go around, huh?

nicely done and you know i cannot wait for another installment.
you are a great writer, my friend.

This story is just completely adorable and amazing :]
more soon!!<3

I like that song. :D

The Beatles.:D:D:D

O__O
*waits for more*

Ah-mazing.:

Adeline Street:

nice update!

8)

Adeline Street:

nice update!

:mrgreen:

Adeline Street:

nice update!

nice update!

cat in dryer:

Aww what an adorable story! :D
It's been a while since I've found Green Day slash on here
Can't wait for more! ^^

hehe thanks so much.
definitely more soon.

Aww what an adorable story! :D
It's been a while since I've found Green Day slash on here
Can't wait for more! ^^

vawwnn.:

God, this is so...passionate.
Real.
Agh.
I'm update deprived already.
:]

Thanks so much!
^_^
and I love your icon.

God, this is so...passionate.
Real.
Agh.
I'm update deprived already.
:]

Tonksy Wonksy:

A-ma-zing.

Words cannot describe how pwntastic this is, so I'll simply say...how pwntastic this is!

1) Love the cuteness, babe. I'm a complete sucker for those hug-and-cuddle Bikes. Hell, I'm a complete sucker for any Bike, especially if it's one of yours.

2) This is one of those original cliches (don't know how to do accent marks). You take a cliched story and turn it into something beautiful and original. That's what I love about your stories.

3) The guilt Billie is feeling...that's just so human. Most people just have Billie and Mike go "let's fuck!" and not have either of them feel any guilt. That's why I read your stories: they're realistic.

I think that's about it...keep writing, dahlin'. I think that this may be Mibba's next greatest story...

Whoa...Mibba's next greatest story?


that makes me feel bubbly inside.

And thank you for mentioning my knack for realism. I HATE the "omg let me just stop everything and all the emotions I've felt for this woman I've been with for 13 years and drop that completely off the face of the earth to be with you".
Puhlease.
Billie truly loves Adrienne, the only woman he'd ever love. It's just that Mike, to him in this fic anyway, is something to be treasured. He's more than just a best friend and a man in Billie's eyes. He's his everything and you'll understand that more as the series progresses.

Soo...glad you got it.

:mrgreen:

A-ma-zing.

Words cannot describe how pwntastic this is, so I'll simply say...how pwntastic this is!

1) Love the cuteness, babe. I'm a complete sucker for those hug-and-cuddle Bikes. Hell, I'm a complete sucker for any Bike, especially if it's one of yours.

2) This is one of those original cliches (don't know how to do accent marks). You take a cliched story and turn it into something beautiful and original. That's what I love about your stories.

3) The guilt Billie is feeling...that's just so human. Most people just have Billie and Mike go "let's fuck!" and not have either of them feel any guilt. That's why I read your stories: they're realistic.

I think that's about it...keep writing, dahlin'. I think that this may be Mibba's next greatest story...

JustBeingMe:

Fantastic!
This story is just... just... love <3
you're fantastic!
I liked that you didn't rush everything. Many slash stories is just sexsexsex. But what you want to read about is the love. and you described it perfectly.
I was actually really nervous for Mike's sake. I was so tensed and nervous about it that I just couldn't read the whole thing in one, I had to do some stuff in between just to calm me down XD
Making somebody actually feel that much with the character shows that you are one hell of an author!

Wow, thank you so much for a comment like that.
It means a hell of a lot to me.

I try to make my characters as realistic as possible and everytime someone feels what they do it means my work is done. haha.

Thanks so much for enjoying the series so far.

And there probably won't be any graphic sex. I believe that relationships are more than that. I like to focus on love, as you said.

Fantastic!
This story is just... just... love <3
you're fantastic!
I liked that you didn't rush everything. Many slash stories is just sexsexsex. But what you want to read about is the love. and you described it perfectly.
I was actually really nervous for Mike's sake. I was so tensed and nervous about it that I just couldn't read the whole thing in one, I had to do some stuff in between just to calm me down XD
Making somebody actually feel that much with the character shows that you are one hell of an author!

Slap Happy Bullet:

damn i wish love was that easy to admit to.
i'm glad he had the nerve, though, because i can't help but fall in love with the two together.
by far my favorite part was "He’s always been a man of words yet the one moment when he could say anything and everything he should he found himself speechless"
it totally threw me off guard and I had to re-read it. that sentence made billie's love so believable, so real. and it's the only way to describe something like that. it was perfect.
i love this story dearly. it'll only get better and better, and i'm pretty pumped about that.

hehe. That's my favourite line in that whole part.
haha.

That one took me alone like a minute to write to get it to sound right. haha.

and yay for getting hooked to another story!

:mrgreen:

damn i wish love was that easy to admit to.
i'm glad he had the nerve, though, because i can't help but fall in love with the two together.
by far my favorite part was "He’s always been a man of words yet the one moment when he could say anything and everything he should he found himself speechless"
it totally threw me off guard and I had to re-read it. that sentence made billie's love so believable, so real. and it's the only way to describe something like that. it was perfect.
i love this story dearly. it'll only get better and better, and i'm pretty pumped about that.