And All the Electric Stars Are Shining - Comments

I agree with Kristina, I feel sorry for Brittany here, especially Mike's shitty reasoning for breaking up with her. This was a well written chapter but I hate the cliffhanger, I want to know what's happening...goddammit... Don't take your time posting the next bit ash. x

Slap Happy Bullet:

that chapter makes me want to hold mike and tell him everything will be perfect.
and i liked how you didn't make brittney a total bitch, what people think of her, you know? you gave us a reason why mike didn't like her, not why thousands of teenage girls don't like her. it's good that you stepped away from what people are putting in your ear.

i really cannot wait until this story starts whirling and just.. goes.
i'm going to fall in love with your writing, and bike all over again.

that chapter makes me want to hold mike and tell him everything will be perfect.
and i liked how you didn't make brittney a total bitch, what people think of her, you know? you gave us a reason why mike didn't like her, not why thousands of teenage girls don't like her. it's good that you stepped away from what people are putting in your ear.

i really cannot wait until this story starts whirling and just.. goes.
i'm going to fall in love with your writing, and bike all over again.

mannequin.:

Well, you definitely know how to keep your readers reading. :grr:
You had to end the chapter there?? :cheese:

It was verr good obviously. :tehe: -reads again-

I am known as the queen of cliffhangers.
:mrgreen:

Well, you definitely know how to keep your readers reading. :grr:
You had to end the chapter there?? :cheese:

It was verr good obviously. :tehe: -reads again-

Hallelujah.:

Tonksy Wonksy:

I shall comment on any story you want me to, as long as you keep up this brilliant writing!

I eat, sleep, and breathe Bike.

U pwn mii, lolz.

:arms:

Pestilence.:

Aw, poor Mike ]:!
Thius is the only greenday slash I've ever read,
but I really like it :]
More when you can !

Really?
and yay!
I always love being the first to convert someone.

Aw, poor Mike ]:!
Thius is the only greenday slash I've ever read,
but I really like it :]
More when you can !

Tonksy Wonksy:

I shall comment on any story you want me to, as long as you keep up this brilliant writing!

I eat, sleep, and breathe Bike.

U pwn mii, lolz.

:arms:

rockerazz8:

Uh oh, the suspense is building!!!! Update soon, i have to know what happens next!!! This is really good.

thankies.
8)

Uh oh, the suspense is building!!!! Update soon, i have to know what happens next!!! This is really good.

rockerazz8:

Very good start. I'm subscribing immediately. *wink*

Very good start. I'm subscribing immediately. *wink*

Tonksy Wonksy:

I shall comment on any story you want me to, as long as you keep up this brilliant writing!

I eat, sleep, and breathe Bike.

U pwn mii, lolz.

I shall comment on any story you want me to, as long as you keep up this brilliant writing!

I eat, sleep, and breathe Bike.

U pwn mii, lolz.

JustBeingMe:

This is great!
Bike is what I live for <33
*Subscribes*

same here, sweetie.
and more shall be up very soon.

as soon as ONE bloody person comments on Temptation.
haha.

This is great!
Bike is what I live for <33
*Subscribes*

Solo Polo Vision.:

wow, this is really good. Please keep me posted with more!

thank you.
and I shall.
^_^

My! You're so loved, Ashy. <3

wow, this is really good. Please keep me posted with more!